Posted by TheRabbit
I like those boots
Posted by Neshama
You need to pay attention to certain details. Tidy the kitchen
Most ads use a hand model ..or if you do it get a manicure. Even a natural one.
The sausages on a plate rather than etc etc
Maybe invest in a better camera
But you show good perspective. I think you could do it ...and you use light well that's one of the hardest things to do ..You are basically ten times better than i could ever be
Posted by Jade_Alexander
Dude, those boots are nice!
Words are good too...
But those boots
Posted by Jim_Joe_Bob_Applethorn
Do you accept Bitcoin?
Posted by hydorah
I like the text, fresh and creative, it sounds like radio commercials from the 1940s, you'd probably lose that freshness if you had to write a real ad though