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StarWars

PART 1

The Uniqueness of the creation (Out of 10) 9/10
I absolutely loved this wrestling bio.

The Overall Creativity (Out of 20) 17/20
It was simple but to the point in terms showing personality

How well the thing made conveys the makers DXP persona (Out of 20) 17/20
Well enough to show persona of someone who doesnt give a butter especially when it comes to dxp games. Very well done


PART 2

the vocaroo/audio recording is between 3 and 5 minutes (Out of 5) 1/5
I couldn’t understand 95% of this, reading the translations isn’t the same as actually being sold through voice. It may have been the mic but it was also how fast you spoke. 1 point taken for being less than 3 mins.

The overall creativity (Out of 15) 7/15
I dunno if just listing what you’ve done up until this point is creative if at all.

How well they promoted/sold their self (Out of 15) 10/15
You promoted yourself well with accolades however i wasn’t really sold.

The entertainment (Out of 15) 9/15
I wish i could understand what you were saying. The 9 is for the write up and effort.


PART 3

How well the item actually fits their personality (Out of 10) 7/10
Fits well with persona when it comes to DXP games

The creativity of the item/creativity of how they sell it (Out of 15) 10/15
The overall idea is creative.

How well you sell it (Out of 15) 8/15
It wasn’t really sold tho. It was just a picture saying use this cream, competitor gave reasons and have more information.

Entertainment (Out of 10) 7/10
It was done well just could have been better.

102-7=95/150
UVD

PART 1

The Uniqueness of the creation (Out of 10) 7/10
Had elements of creativity. Meshed well with he message. Was hoping a bit more because she displayed great rendering skills prior

The Overall Creativity (Out of 20) 13/20
See above.
How well the thing made conveys the makers DXP persona (Out of 20) 16/20
I mean it basically had her face in there, and UVD is what her face exudes lol facetious but chill scorpio. Everything else just tied her up well.


PART 2

the vocaroo/audio recording is between 3 and 5 minutes (Out of 5) 4/5
I would have given it a 5/5 but it was less than 3 minutes 2:56 to be exact

The overall creativity (Out of 15) 15/15
I loved how she basically took the informercial idea and ran with it and i love how she got everyone to sell her. Amazing job here.

How well they promoted/sold their self (Out of 15) 15/15
The fact that you can get people to take time out of their lives to do this for you speaks volumes and it was edited and sold very well

The entertainment (Out of 15) 15/15
You had me at father of dragons


PART 3

How well the item actually fits their personality (Out of 10) 5/10
Your name is the antithesis of what you’re selling in the pamphlet so it kinda confused me. The writing is where you got points but the overall contradiction with your name and what your pamphlet was selling just didnt vibe with me.

The creativity of the item/creativity of how they sell it (Out of 15) 10/15
From a pure item creativity standpoint with the addition of writing it was well done.

How well you sell it (Out of 15) 11/15
It was sold well with advantages and discretions as well as demographic

Entertainment (Out of 10) 8/10
The pamphlet from an entertainment standpoint was well done

119-3=116/150
My score cards have been submitted
Posted by AfternoonDelights22
Posted by DickButt
What's the penalty for 1) lateness and 2) shorter duration than 3 minutes.


-3 on UVDs vocaroo for being 30 minutes late

-7 on starwars vocaroo for being 70 minutes late


the shorter vocaroo penalty is up to you on the scorecard for it
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gotcha thanks. Will submit soon.
What's the penalty for 1) lateness and 2) shorter duration than 3 minutes.
I'm here. Just tryna get a feel for both entries
Posted by sakuraflowers
Posted by DickButt
Posted by sakuraflowers
@DickButt

"Why didn't you step up to get your team more PM's as momentum died?"
---> I just recovered from a cold. My body is not ready to pull an all nighter.

What is selling strategy?
It's when you take a great product or service and using particularly marketing methods to target towards your target market, no? You go through steps like segmenting the market, you understand what your target market needs are, and you produce a great product or service that suits the target market's need, no?

We were essentially marketing a product/service to DXP members. We took something and made it more appealing first. Everyone who signed up with us gets a customized membership card from UVD, along with a tailored music video. Then I went to try and understand the needs of our target market, as no market segmentation needed. I asked them and I tried to listen to what their needs are of our club, and made modifications so that our club can meet their needs. I tailored my pitch to them. Isn't it suppose to be that way when you market a product or service?

"Do you feel your product would survive and keep generating regardless? Was there a concrete contingency plan put into place?"
---> Yes because again, I was not asking people to send links because of some competition for the most part. I believed in what I was promoting. Given enough time, like most businesses, modifications would be made to the promoted product or service so that it can be meet the needs of our target market. I didn't treat it like a competition task for the most part. For a large chunk of time, I was trying to sell our product/service.
---> We lost because we didn't mass PM everybody, and based purely on what I saw, ONLY because we didn't just go "you need to PM this link to AfternoonDelights". I promoting what was good about our club, what exclusive benefits are available (most notably the custom membership card), I was trying to feedback on how our club can meet their needs, and how they have options if there were something that they didn't like. So let me ask you ... from a purely business perspective, what could I have done otherwise?


You could have also done what every other business does. Watch your competitor and use their tactics to your own advantage. Tho i understand they posted much later but you can have beat them at their game and won out the task. Instead you chose to stick to a strategy that had no dynamic.


How do I watch my competitor if most of their strategy was in PM? I didn't even know they were doing it in PMs until after the fact. I followed their thread constantly as soon as it was up.
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They had set up a pm link for nights right? And they were all over the board when they were marketing their brand for tier1. It's not hard to miss what they were doing. It became so bad one specific member even got pissed at the spam PM's publicly.
Posted by sakuraflowers
@AfternoonDelights22
@feby
@DickButt

That's why I should stay. This is a business. Knowing how market a great product or service towards the needs of a target market is major key to a business's success. I'm creative and makes great connections with potential customers, to ensure that whatever product or service created can meet the needs and the demands of those potential customers.


So far the fact that you've failed twice as a PM is worrisome and strong point to let you go. How do you combat this?
Posted by sakuraflowers
@DickButt

"Why didn't you step up to get your team more PM's as momentum died?"
---> I just recovered from a cold. My body is not ready to pull an all nighter.

What is selling strategy?
It's when you take a great product or service and using particularly marketing methods to target towards your target market, no? You go through steps like segmenting the market, you understand what your target market needs are, and you produce a great product or service that suits the target market's need, no?

We were essentially marketing a product/service to DXP members. We took something and made it more appealing first. Everyone who signed up with us gets a customized membership card from UVD, along with a tailored music video. Then I went to try and understand the needs of our target market, as no market segmentation needed. I asked them and I tried to listen to what their needs are of our club, and made modifications so that our club can meet their needs. I tailored my pitch to them. Isn't it suppose to be that way when you market a product or service?

"Do you feel your product would survive and keep generating regardless? Was there a concrete contingency plan put into place?"
---> Yes because again, I was not asking people to send links because of some competition for the most part. I believed in what I was promoting. Given enough time, like most businesses, modifications would be made to the promoted product or service so that it can be meet the needs of our target market. I didn't treat it like a competition task for the most part. For a large chunk of time, I was trying to sell our product/service.
---> We lost because we didn't mass PM everybody, and based purely on what I saw, ONLY because we didn't just go "you need to PM this link to AfternoonDelights". I promoting what was good about our club, what exclusive benefits are available (most notably the custom membership card), I was trying to feedback on how our club can meet their needs, and how they have options if there were something that they didn't like. So let me ask you ... from a purely business perspective, what could I have done otherwise?


You could have also done what every other business does. Watch your competitor and use their tactics to your own advantage. Tho i understand they posted much later but you can have beat them at their game and won out the task. Instead you chose to stick to a strategy that had no dynamic.
@SakuraFLowers please answer the questions i've asked so I can make a decision
Posted by starwars
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@dickbutt why didn't you post the scores for this round


I don't owe to you after your cookiemonstering so i won't.



I don't know why you're so butthurt over it, I stated the truth you overlooked their rules and 7 exclusive things part


I didn't over look anything. You and your ex teammate just wanna act like nothings wrong on your side.


pfft please you were acting like nothing is wrong on their side


You can keep thinking and cookiemonstering about it. And then you tell me im butthurt.


I'm not the one refusing to post stuff I'm supposed to post because someone is being cookiemonstery


No other judge has posted their scorecard up until now except me. And i did it as a courtesy. Nowhere does it say i HAVE to post it. But keep on making up stuff.


so you stopped doing it because you're butthurt
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You don't deserve it. Virgos can't take bad things said about them. This game proved it time and time again. And i'm the butthurt one lol I'm done answering your quotes.
Posted by starwars
Posted by DickButt
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@dickbutt why didn't you post the scores for this round


I don't owe to you after your cookiemonstering so i won't.



I don't know why you're so butthurt over it, I stated the truth you overlooked their rules and 7 exclusive things part


I didn't over look anything. You and your ex teammate just wanna act like nothings wrong on your side.


pfft please you were acting like nothing is wrong on their side


You can keep thinking and cookiemonstering about it. And then you tell me im butthurt.


I'm not the one refusing to post stuff I'm supposed to post because someone is being cookiemonstery
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No other judge has posted their scorecard up until now except me. And i did it as a courtesy. Nowhere does it say i HAVE to post it. But keep on making up stuff.
Posted by starwars
Posted by DickButt
Posted by starwars
Posted by DickButt
Posted by starwars
@dickbutt why didn't you post the scores for this round


I don't owe to you after your cookiemonstering so i won't.



I don't know why you're so butthurt over it, I stated the truth you overlooked their rules and 7 exclusive things part


I didn't over look anything. You and your ex teammate just wanna act like nothings wrong on your side.


pfft please you were acting like nothing is wrong on their side
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You can keep thinking and cookiemonstering about it. And then you tell me im butthurt.
Posted by starwars
Posted by DickButt
Posted by starwars
@dickbutt why didn't you post the scores for this round


I don't owe to you after your cookiemonstering so i won't.



I don't know why you're so butthurt over it, I stated the truth you overlooked their rules and 7 exclusive things part
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I didn't over look anything. You and your ex teammate just wanna act like nothings wrong on your side.
Posted by starwars
@dickbutt why didn't you post the scores for this round


I don't owe to you after your cookiemonstering so i won't.
Posted by UnusualVaginalDischarge
Posted by DickButt
Posted by UnusualVaginalDischarge
Posted by DickButt
@UnusualVaginalDischarge

What could you have done to kept your momentum from dying? Do you feel you guys felt your product would do the work for you? Why should you stay over sakura?

@Sakuraflowers

Why didn't you step up to get your team more PM's as momentum died? Why should you stay over UVD? Do you feel your product would survive and keep generating regardless? Was there a concrete contingency plan put into place?


I guess we could've stayed up all night which was not going to happen. I didn't think the product would do the work for us but for some reason I had the impression that PMing ppl to send the link to Nights was somehow cheating or cheap.
I should stay because I am an artsy fartsy work mule.


You both had work at the same time? Clearly your product and approach was good enough to get you the raw scores but you lost int he PM's/sales division. Someone should have been monitoring that from your side. Was this talked about amongst the two of you?


We decided we'd promote using a thread and posting the link about.
we didn't talk about a clear cut strategy for selling.
or perhaps the thread was the selling strategy
im not a saleswoman, i'm an artist.
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And this is a show about business not art. So clearly you're in the wrong game then. This doesn't bode well for your stay.

@Sakuraflowers Why wasn't there a selling strategy made? You're the PM this was your responsibility to come up with something and have a solid contingency just in case. No business will hire someone who has no foresight.
Posted by UnusualVaginalDischarge
Posted by DickButt
@UnusualVaginalDischarge

What could you have done to kept your momentum from dying? Do you feel you guys felt your product would do the work for you? Why should you stay over sakura?

@Sakuraflowers

Why didn't you step up to get your team more PM's as momentum died? Why should you stay over UVD? Do you feel your product would survive and keep generating regardless? Was there a concrete contingency plan put into place?


I guess we could've stayed up all night which was not going to happen. I didn't think the product would do the work for us but for some reason I had the impression that PMing ppl to send the link to Nights was somehow cheating or cheap.
I should stay because I am an artsy fartsy work mule.
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You both had work at the same time? Clearly your product and approach was good enough to get you the raw scores but you lost int he PM's/sales division. Someone should have been monitoring that from your side. Was this talked about amongst the two of you?
@UnusualVaginalDischarge

What could you have done to kept your momentum from dying? Do you feel you guys felt your product would do the work for you? Why should you stay over sakura?

@Sakuraflowers

Why didn't you step up to get your team more PM's as momentum died? Why should you stay over UVD? Do you feel your product would survive and keep generating regardless? Was there a concrete contingency plan put into place?
Posted by Damnata
Posted by starwars
HELL

TO

THE

MOTHERtreetrunkING

YES


Can you imagine how many points he deducted that a 12 points advantage only lead to a final 4 points difference?

Ayyyy that fair judging.

Well played man. Good night.
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keep cookiemonstering
Posted by starwars
Posted by DickButt
Posted by starwars
@dickbutt

what do you think of the #winning team rules and 7 "exclusive" things list


You'll find out when i post my results.


I don't see you trying to find answers for the reasons behind their butterty list
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Cool