Hey all Candlegirl has read my poem Dare to Dream and sent me quite a nice response. I would like very much for the rest of you to give an opinion as well. (if you don't mind). I would be so grateful for the feedback ok. Waiting in suspense, bye for now.
I read your poem, There is a common thread in it that brings back memories I rather not recall. The work however is quite good. There is a powerfull feel to the poem, the words are to close to somethings in my life to give you a fair responce. sorry
funny I did awake one night last week to the sound of thunder, how far off I sat and wondered, started humming a song from 1982, ain't it funny how the night moves when you havent anything left to loose, with autom moving in. sorry love I had to say that.
James tate thanks for the response to the peom. I understand that you can not comment on the piece. I wrote it during a most upsetting and confusing time for me. Unrequited love is one of the most difficult things a person can face. Again thanks for your honesty, I do appreciate it.
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December 06, 2002<BR> <BR> DARE TO DREAM<BR> <BR> <BR> The scent of your essence still lingers in the air as I lay upon my bed<BR> <BR> Closing my eyes I see your sweet face before me, if only for awhile as I draw your memory closer<BR> <BR> Never has a s
I have to say...after so many dailey readings of Duncan expose horoscope...not one scope has been even merely accurate. The NY Post scope is so accurate it's scary so I put my trust in that one. Sorry Duncan. <BR> <BR> You're just not delivering the good
This is my first time here, so I am feeling somewhat unbalanced. Can't guess I am a Libra can you. The blond thing and Libra connection is funny. My significant other tells me that my blond roots are showing at times. Yet he tells everyone else that he t
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Don't you just sometimes wish you had an exciting jet-set life instead of a hum-drum day at the office, back to home, weekends off lifestyle? It's the same every day for alot of people. And it's like death.
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