Let Those who have wisdom, figure out this poem.

Being a bard and musician, I like to write songs and lyrics,
I play guitar in a dark melodic Heavy Metal band.
I wrote this poem staying up all night,
this is by far, my very best masterpiece.
I felt the stars all around me as I was writing it,
it has a lot of emotional relevance to me..

Let's see if you understand
what I'm talking about here
and figure out the story...


Mistress, Forest, Darkness
~Minotaur~ (K. Fury)
April 08, 2010.


At the soft glimpse of falling sunset,
beneath the crescent moon to the west,
came a temptress from the shadows glance,
and fallen was I, in a sorrowful trance.


Darkness of forgotten silent scorn,
a fragment of memories forlorn.
Crystal rose with a poisonous thorn,
piercing my spirit, from dusk til dawn...


The Prince of an ancient kingdom,
Bringer of Light, Guardian of Wisdom.
Watcher of the Heavens, Seeker of Depths,
I am He, who unveils where secrets are kept.


by Odin's crows and ravaging wolves,
struck by the arrow sent from above...
Amidst the Count's despair and hope,
Venus sent me, a fragrance of love.


Damsel in distress, confused and dazed,
A dark aura, a seductive gaze,
Pluto mystery, cosmic intensity,
A bond eternal, a beauty infernal...


My heart raced to an overture,
drawing me to her tragic allure.
the Fury's wrath, thus spellbound,
by the Queen of her Winter crowned..


Brown eyes, raven hair, there she smiled,
and in my darkness, I saw her light...
We held each others, so close, yet so far...
and I found peace... in an lifetime of war.


A Desire so intense!! a Love so perfect...
pure unbridled Passion, crescendo climax~
a voice of angel, a touch of vampire...
an absolute connection, an eclipse Hellfire.


Yet tragedy breeze at the horizons,
a spear to my heart its treacherous iron.
Enrage the blood of the wretched tyrant,
drinking deep red my wounded vengeance!!


Upon this altar, my soul bleed and torn.
Yearning for her touch, alas I won't mourn..
deep within, I saw, the sign of the horns,
And in this hateful darkness, my Power reborn.


Now my land lies in broken turmoil,
tainted seed sown in purity soil.
Passion to ashes, Affection to dust,
She, the mistress of her own lust...


Emperor of the Void I shall be,
petrify my realm for eternity..
My castle then time shall hold,
enthrone now in my kingdom cold...


A Shadow of unforgotten lovelorn,
a fragmented thread of memories adorn..
Cosmic att

............

Cosmic attraction - a false twisted illusion,
Nocturnal heartbreak... a fullmoon reminiscence...

no clue.

perseus?

Perseus?!?
lol, this has absolutely NOTHING to do with Greek Mythology,
this is MY story, 🙂
oh, and the clues can be found in every one of the 4 lines here and there in every other stanzas...
if you read between the lines, and visualize, you may be able to figure it out.

^ INDEED.
Close, though not entirely true,
"Mistress" in the title, implied that she was never mine in the first place,
but I did her give my heart, if not my soul too.

In the 3rd stanza, the 4 beings I mentioned, represent the 4 directions of the Earth,
the 4 great stars, and the 4 fixed signs.
Taurus being the Bringer of Light.

but how did you figure it out?
what other clues did you have?

hey, minotaur, allegory...sue me.

Was reading over this site and came across your sad song. I knew right away it was about a scorp such as myself. So sorry, some can be as sweet as sugar then be as nasty as a hurricane unless you are an eagle such as I we have a healthy balance. Did you do something to totally enrage her or did she just play you?

wow, this thread is ancient, didn't think it'd get revived o_O
thanks for your post. 🙂


I did nothing to enrage her,
I'm pretty smooth with the ladies, I always know what to do,
however I was totally confused and dazed in that scenario.
she approached and talked to me, she picked me up, lol >._>

I'm over the whole thing now,
and I came out of it with the knowledge - that the connection from Taurus man to Scorpio woman is INTENSE, lol.
absolutely out of this world!

Can't wait to meet another scorpio girl. 😛