Scorpio Literature

Hello there everyone. I want to first start by introducing myself. I am a 20 year old female. I breathe a Scorpio Sun, Moon, Venus, and Jupiter. My Mercury is in Libra, and I walk around carrying a strong but sweet Taurus Ascendant. I literally do enjoy long walks on the beach...lol, Margaritas, and not so much getting caught in the rain as much as I like to sit on my porch and watch the rain fall. I am an old soul, or at least that's what I've been told. Some days it feels like I have all of the wise answers for everyone except myself.

Now that some of the personal stuff is out of the way. I wanted to ask the opinion of any avid readers on here. Regardless of your sign, please take a look. I would post this under one of the other topics but this book I'm writing actually relates to one of the elements of the Scorpio sign, which of all of them for this title I chose Death. It's not written in the style of Final Destination, but it talks about Death the actual Reaper.

The piece is going to be like a biography of Saint Abaddon living out his human life, his spirit life, and even his reincarnated life if I can get it to go smoothly in that direction. As I was saying, I'm putting it here because I wanted to know if I'm doing well in my element, or if I need to add something else to the pot.

Heres the link: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1999641-The-Witches-Phantom

It's only the first chapter. I have about 3 so far, 23 "Word Processor" pages long.

Thanks in advance to anyone who gives me a look. I appreciate it!

Am reading... will comment later, when I return home.

Interesting, so far.


🙂

Thank you. I logged back into my acct and was surprised to see that it went from 17 to 30 views. lol.

Posted by WordBoxer279
Hello there everyone. I want to first start by introducing myself. I am a 20 year old female. I breathe a Scorpio Sun, Moon, Venus, and Jupiter. My Mercury is in Libra, and I walk around carrying a strong but sweet Taurus Ascendant. I literally do enjoy long walks on the beach...lol, Margaritas, and not so much getting caught in the rain as much as I like to sit on my porch and watch the rain fall. I am an old soul, or at least that's what I've been told. Some days it feels like I have all of the wise answers for everyone except myself.

Now that some of the personal stuff is out of the way. I wanted to ask the opinion of any avid readers on here. Regardless of your sign, please take a look. I would post this under one of the other topics but this book I'm writing actually relates to one of the elements of the Scorpio sign, which of all of them for this title I chose Death. It's not written in the style of Final Destination, but it talks about Death the actual Reaper.

The piece is going to be like a biography of Saint Abaddon living out his human life, his spirit life, and even his reincarnated life if I can get it to go smoothly in that direction. As I was saying, I'm putting it here because I wanted to know if I'm doing well in my element, or if I need to add something else to the pot.

Heres the link: http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1999641-The-Witches-Phantom

It's only the first chapter. I have about 3 so far, 23 "Word Processor" pages long.

Thanks in advance to anyone who gives me a look. I appreciate it!

This sounds like a familiar story.

Posted by WordBoxer279
Thank you. I logged back into my acct and was surprised to see that it went from 17 to 30 views. lol.

Nice. 🙂

Posted by WordBoxer279
... this book I'm writing actually relates to one of the elements of the Scorpio sign, which of all of them for this title I chose Death. It's not written in the style of Final Destination, but it talks about Death the actual Reaper.

The piece is going to be like a biography of Saint Abaddon living out his human life, his spirit life, and even his reincarnated life ...

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I'm familiar with Abaddon, but not the Saint-- I assumed you were drawing on this:


"And the fifth angel blew his trumpet, and I saw a star fallen from heaven to earth, and he was given the key to

the shaft of the bottomless pit....


Then from the smoke came locusts on the earth, and they were given power like the power of scorpions of the

earth. They were told not to harm the grass of the earth or any green plant or any tree, but only those people

who do not have the seal of God on their foreheads... and their torment was like the torment of a

scorpion when it stings someone.


They have tails and stings like scorpions, and their power to hurt people ... is in their tails.

They have as king over them the angel of the bottomless pit.

His name... is Abaddon- "


And if so-- what an interesting storyline/muse.

Maybe you could clarify?

Otherwise, though I wanted to strangle you for the suspense (*grin*), I had to keep reading to the end.

Like the others-- I'm anxious to see more.