Reverie In Blue

Velvet whispers
Inaudible murmuring
Stifled secrets

Indigo shadows veil desperation
Obscuring desire

In a lucid azure dream
I found you

Under a sapphire sky.

Thanks! 🙂 It is indeed an original written by yours truly. I just wrote it yesterday.

The title I'm not sure about, though. I feel like it's too cliche-sounding. We'll call it a working title. Also I feel like I could have gone further with the poem, but it only took me about a minute to write it, in a rare moment of inspiration.

Wow Phoenis rising, great piece. I absolutely loved it. You truly have talet, and a gift with expressing words and emotion. The reader can go so many places with it, thats what is so great. The piece can truly become how and what the reader wishes it to be. It is just open enough in meaning, that multiple levels of understanding it can applied. Thanks for sharing the piece, I look forward to reading more of your work. Man I love reading exceptionally good stuff, keep it up. Gotta run see ya later. TW2

There I go with the typing stuff again, sorry. I guess I am on a roll, hope it passes soon. Bye Tw2 (it can be applied) Sorry for messing up your name, I gotta watch that. Ta! Ta! TW2

very good

twinflame2, thank you so much for the sweet words. Also thank you James Tate and Parallax. I wrote a few more the other day, I will probably post them but they're pretty different than "reverie in blue". Twinflame I also look forward to more of your stuff.

I don't know why I've been more inspired than usual lately. I wonder where the moon's been.

Did Parallax have all his comments deleted or something?

Great, now half the time I'm going to look like a freak who talks to myself, lol

The question is how did he do that I remember this thread and you are right where did they go?

DXP must have deleted them as per his request.

could be but he still has postings from long ago.