The title I'm not sure about, though. I feel like it's too cliche-sounding. We'll call it a working title. Also I feel like I could have gone further with the poem, but it only took me about a minute to write it, in a rare moment of inspiration.
Wow Phoenis rising, great piece. I absolutely loved it. You truly have talet, and a gift with expressing words and emotion. The reader can go so many places with it, thats what is so great. The piece can truly become how and what the reader wishes it to be. It is just open enough in meaning, that multiple levels of understanding it can applied. Thanks for sharing the piece, I look forward to reading more of your work. Man I love reading exceptionally good stuff, keep it up. Gotta run see ya later. TW2
There I go with the typing stuff again, sorry. I guess I am on a roll, hope it passes soon. Bye Tw2 (it can be applied) Sorry for messing up your name, I gotta watch that. Ta! Ta! TW2
twinflame2, thank you so much for the sweet words. Also thank you James Tate and Parallax. I wrote a few more the other day, I will probably post them but they're pretty different than "reverie in blue". Twinflame I also look forward to more of your stuff.
I don't know why I've been more inspired than usual lately. I wonder where the moon's been.
Well, it so happens that I was asked my permission to dedicate 2 whole pages to me in an upcoming book called The International Who's Who of Poetry with one of the pages being my poem and the other page being a biography of me. Woohoo! (Hopefully it's n
Have been away for a few days & haven't checked in. I am going to the local "book mine" tomorrow & will look for your suggestion. Sounds like something I'd enjoy! For me, besides dialogue, it's all about the characters & how the author describes them. Wil
Freedom... Pure naked freedom. It's the loss of all inhibitions. It's like stipping off all your clothes and running bare bottomed through the desert durring a lightning storm, sand burning the soles of your feet and sweat and rain water running down your
I just thought like saying I finally got my prize for winning third place and second runner up for this stupid literature contest at school... I won ten bucks though. Yay! Ten bucks... Well, I at least had lunch money this way... I really went over board
Inaudible murmuring
Stifled secrets
Indigo shadows veil desperation
Obscuring desire
In a lucid azure dream
I found you
Under a sapphire sky.