pisces and poetry

they love it ... they get high as the rhymes serenade them, they gasp for air as the words flow, every letter playing with their mind like wind with a feather, one touch and they gasp, one kiss and they shiver, one hug and every muscle let's loose.

my question is: I wrote some lines that describe how i feel internally and about my pisces, i was contemplating giving them to her but some of them are rather dark, others are rather sad and i am not sure how she will handle them, she is still young and unsure about us.

i have been feeling that lately there has been little to no communication between us and it is the last two weeks before we i go with her to spend xmas with her parents, then it will be long distance after that for a while.

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excuse the blunt post

mister_eee ..i think she will appreciate them, and seeing them actually written in an artistic* tone may even help further her understanding & openess of your honesty, since this is our language. Plus she could go back & re-read/sink them in anytime. i agree with Ms.Pisces, we're not into the cheesy/generic, and would much more relate to the darker mood & depth, overall. But be aware, there are many kinds of DARK, the more intensely romantic/sensual, then the extremely depressive, etc, which may only bring her down or confuse more. So some awareness there would be a good idea, too. As long as she feels some hope & faith, all should be okay. Luck ..

thanks you guys, i jumped the gun and told her some things that came to my mind as i was walking from office to my room, nothing sad or depressive, she was slowly moving her hands, in front of the webcam. i felt sad when she felt sad i wished i could jump into the screen and hold her.

Hizaki if you look at my first post "help please, p-angel and other fish" you can read the background if you are in the mood for a novel.

mystic_fish nice to hear from you again, i will be careful not to confuse her, thanks for the advice

You're welcome. 🙂

be careful Fleo when I said DARK SIDE I was talking about MYSELF not her, I simply wanted to have an idea about how much I can let go of without creating the impression that I am a monster.
you are talking about exposing THIER dark side, ooo that depends on how you put it, I find my pisces intolerant to external criticism simply because it creates too much pressure on her, she starts feeling like I am breaking her myth about herself and if the criticism hits deep whithin her she hates me momentaraly, breaks into tears and doubts everything.

positive signs (leo one) should never criticise negative signs (pisces one) because negative signs percieve them as egotistical simpletons who are less likely to even know what the hell they're talking about