ode to Pisces woman

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wagtail
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Posted by umisaid
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Woah 😘 love it
Thank you!

something in this ode still doesnt give me a good flow, i need to keep adjusting some words to make it sound right.
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I'll stay posted. I see what you mean I think. But it's very close - quite like the broken up sections - and the larger parts run together beautifully I think.

It reads like a plate or meal. In tasty smooshed together segments so... But the flavours are mixed. Enjoyed it 🙂
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Posted by wagtail
Posted by umisaid
Posted by wagtail
Woah 😘 love it
Thank you!

something in this ode still doesnt give me a good flow, i need to keep adjusting some words to make it sound right.
I'll stay posted. I see what you mean I think. But it's very close - quite like the broken up sections - and the larger parts run together beautifully I think.

It reads like a plate or meal. In tasty smooshed together segments so... But the flavours are mixed. Enjoyed it 🙂
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thank you very much waggy, i changed it up a bit and i like it better. i plan to text her this in a bit.
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Posted by MIIeFisk
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Posted by MIIeFisk
a besotted bull is the sweetest thing to behold.
serious question, are all you Pisces this fantastic? So much love within you. I cannot believe it, how well she treats me.
LOL... "all" seems like a bit of a reach. But a Pisces who is in a good place and a secure headspace can have a lot to give, not just love. Support, encouragement, understanding are given freely to those that have secured our affections.

I'm happy for you and rooting for you both.
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She is slowly crafting me to be the best version of myself. I can only imagine what will become of us. Thank you, we are both making the effort to keep each other happy.