PrinceCrab
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Poems i wrote.....
What a loving, touching tribute to your father, PrinceCrab...*DepthCharge is right, there really are no words, the beauty, heart & soul you speak in your poetry says it all..
Btw, my condolences to your father, PC.
Btw, my condolences to your father, PC.
Thank you both very much...as you might be able to tell, i love to write poetry...and i hope i am good at it lol
child
What most find hard to come to grips with in death is that even tho the person is gone the relationship is still there. all the memories all the good and bad times. All you ever had to do with this person is atill with you but you have no contact with them. I like what you wrote keep up the work it will help you deal with life.
What most find hard to come to grips with in death is that even tho the person is gone the relationship is still there. all the memories all the good and bad times. All you ever had to do with this person is atill with you but you have no contact with them. I like what you wrote keep up the work it will help you deal with life.
Wow bad spelling and sappy words, dude are you a girl or what? Are you a price"cess"? Be a man and know MEN DON'T CRY! My father died and I have moved on stop acting gay and straighten up! Suffering is for weak people, A TRUE CHRISTIAN supports God and our nation and our President!!! If your father died it was because God wanted it to be so, your weak and obviously not really a man because only women write like this! Get OVER IT!
Well i'm 16 and my father was diginosed with ALS when i was 15...I sat there and watched him suffer and slowly die...So i'm sorry that i am not ok with the fact that he is gone...and i wrote those poems, one when he had a DNR made for him, and the other when he gave the signal to be off life support. And as for bad spelling, "price"cess"?" maybe you should look at what your writing...And i am a christian, and i know that he is in a better place...and i have somewhat come to terms with that fact. But you know nothing about my familys history, or mine for that matter, so what the hell gives you the right to tell me to do ANYTHING— and what the hell does President Bush have to do with this...I might not agree with all his actions, but I respect him for sticking up for what he belives in...many people in politics are basicly welcome mats for the public.
Your strength, love and sensitivity shine through the powerful words of your poetry..'they are perfect, i enjoyed reading them. Keep up the poetry, you're very talented, PC.
Empire Leo? What a Joke, Everyone knows im the only LEADER here on this Site, and Furthermore why are you picking on kids here on this board if its a fight u want then Send me a messege and ill tell you where and when and how to go a life. Kid Crab Dont let people like this joke get to you, you dont have to explain yourself to NO1!
Dear Empireleo,
So il suo gioco. Non lavorera, vedra, penso che sappia chi lei e ed il prossimo tempo la vedo la confrontero. Anche, lei non ha destra per parlare della mia famiglia il mio cosi dorso via, o la faro!!!
So il suo gioco. Non lavorera, vedra, penso che sappia chi lei e ed il prossimo tempo la vedo la confrontero. Anche, lei non ha destra per parlare della mia famiglia il mio cosi dorso via, o la faro!!!
I second that.
lol, glad you agree lol ;o]
" In English"
lol king bull...sorry for confusing you...i just said that i think i know who you are (which i don't now) and not to talk about my family behind my back, otherwise you will not see the light of day...or something like that
Prince Crab,
Writing poetry helps the creator work through tough emotional times in their life. Somehow the feelings are pulled outside ourselves and transformed onto the paper they are written on.
As for myself when I write it somehow helps me find closure or completion regarding the situation. My sympathy to you about your father I know it has to be hard at your age to deal with.
I also had to watch my mother die in the hospital, and it took six long weeks. It was pure torture for us.
I am much older and still have difficulty from loosing my mother a little over a year ago. She was my best friend and a great lady, I will always miss her I believe.
As far as any negative feedback just consider the source and feel sorry for that person. Obviously they were taught that to be a man is to be tough and to show no weakness. It's just very unfortunate that they did not also learn that it is not proper or kind to mock someone going through the death of a loved one. The relationship with their father must not have been based on much respect for one another as they have not displayed much respect in this situation.
Again I am very sorry for your loss.
TW2
Writing poetry helps the creator work through tough emotional times in their life. Somehow the feelings are pulled outside ourselves and transformed onto the paper they are written on.
As for myself when I write it somehow helps me find closure or completion regarding the situation. My sympathy to you about your father I know it has to be hard at your age to deal with.
I also had to watch my mother die in the hospital, and it took six long weeks. It was pure torture for us.
I am much older and still have difficulty from loosing my mother a little over a year ago. She was my best friend and a great lady, I will always miss her I believe.
As far as any negative feedback just consider the source and feel sorry for that person. Obviously they were taught that to be a man is to be tough and to show no weakness. It's just very unfortunate that they did not also learn that it is not proper or kind to mock someone going through the death of a loved one. The relationship with their father must not have been based on much respect for one another as they have not displayed much respect in this situation.
Again I am very sorry for your loss.
TW2
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Its a real helpless feeling when someone you love is going to die
Yet you cant do anything thing accept sit there and cry
You see your loved one dieing in your arms
You want to help, but your afraid to harm
You see him in his bed and it breaks your heart
That this sweet man might soon depart
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This one I wrote after I found out we was going to die...
I'll remember all the good times and the bad
Might think about all the rest that we could of had
You might leave this world but you wont leave our hearts
Your love is something that cant be torn apart
We will love and remember you till the days that we die
Then we'll go and join you in that deep blue sky
Up in the clouds is where you will be
looking down at us is what you will see
Saying this phrase can not be overdue
Steve a father, son, brother and a good friend too
We just want you to know that now and forever We Will Love You
Just tell me what you think....and if it matters i read the last one at his funeral....and he had ALS for 2 years....now he is singing with the angels up in heaven.