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The Bridge
You like the letter "s" too much.
"They are forced to run and find safety, but ends up helpless on a battered bridge. "
"End up" is correct.
"not only are they preyed upon by these beasts, but other deathly mishaps occurs"
"Mishaps occur" is correct.
Normally i'm not a grammar nazi but since you want to write i think its best to tell you such mistakes detract from the professionalism of your prose. It just doesnt look good.
You can send me a link by pm here or post a link for everyone, i wont give an email.
"They are forced to run and find safety, but ends up helpless on a battered bridge. "
"End up" is correct.
"not only are they preyed upon by these beasts, but other deathly mishaps occurs"
"Mishaps occur" is correct.
Normally i'm not a grammar nazi but since you want to write i think its best to tell you such mistakes detract from the professionalism of your prose. It just doesnt look good.
You can send me a link by pm here or post a link for everyone, i wont give an email.
Thank you. I believe my phone did that because it's correct in my folder. I copied and paste
Posted by Mr_Pinchy
You like the letter "s" too much.
"They are forced to run and find safety, but ends up helpless on a battered bridge. "
"End up" is correct.
"not only are they preyed upon by these beasts, but other deathly mishaps occurs"
"Mishaps occur" is correct.
Normally i'm not a grammar nazi but since you want to write i think its best to tell you such mistakes detract from the professionalism of your prose. It just doesnt look good.
You can send me a link by pm here or post a link for everyone, i wont give an email.
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Posted by MissLibra
Have you received enough volunteers?
Posted by MissLibra
Have you received enough volunteers?
I'll email you...
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The Bridge - Riya Jordan and her friends are excited about their trip to Brazil for a wildlife and forest organization before heading off to college. However, things take a turn for the worst when bodies are found mangled among their campgrounds by two predatorial stalkers. They are forced to run and find safety, but ends up helpless on a battered bridge.
While on this bridge, not only are they preyed upon by these beasts, but other deathly mishaps occurs
on... THE BRIDGE.