An attempt to write a poem

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caprigirlwithvirgo
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About my virgo!

Let me know how is it!!!
He does not know and he is out for shopping...
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While coming and going, while laughing and singing...
I thought many times...

About that first sight of your's towards me.

THAT look you give ..That unusual feeling of escatsy while I am with you..
Why does it make my heart feel so restless, so helpless??

Tell me who are you? Piercing my heart and my soul, slowly and quietly...
Tell me who are you that has made it so compelleing for me that there is none but one choice left for me- that is to ADMIT that I LOVE YOU... More than myself, never knew I would love some one so dearly....

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OK, it is not a poem, looks more like a love letter ... HAHAHAHA,but, it is how I feel for him!!!

Any comment, mockery etc. are welcome!!

This one VIRGO... took my everything... My head, heart, my soul...
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Reiniba-Chan
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Well. I think it is very sweet. And I know the virgo will greatly greatly appreciate it. I don't know why. But so far, from what I know of virgos, they love it when their woman shows emotion, feelings, and especially if they right it down in a poem or letter. they will be very excited over it..X_X it's strange but even after knowing that, I am still afraid to be too vulnerable by expressing my feelings for my virgo. but he would love it.

I don't know why but I don't want to feel vulnerable, especially with my own husband. however, that is exactly what my virgo needs. so I believe they need you to be passionate about them in order for them to feel like their is meaning to the relationship.

I don't know, I could be wrong, but that is my experience tis all.