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This topic was created in the Astrology forum by twinflame2 on Thursday, June 3, 2004 and has 4 replies.

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@twinflame2
21 Years500+ Posts

Hey all Candlegirl has read my poem Dare to Dream and sent me quite a nice response. I would like very much for the rest of you to give an opinion as well. (if you don't mind). I would be so grateful for the feedback ok. Waiting in suspense, bye for now.

Tw2

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@james tate
21 Years10,000+ PostsCapricorn

I read your poem, There is a common thread in it that brings back memories I rather not recall. The work however is quite good. There is a powerfull feel to the poem, the words are to close to somethings in my life to give you a fair responce. sorry

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@Candle Girl
21 Years

James,

You have my heart!!! So have you heard any BS latey, That would be Bob Segar!!! You old Sot!!!

Glad you responded to tw2. You are a fine man. Prince Charles!!!

CG

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@james tate
21 Years10,000+ PostsCapricorn

funny I did awake one night last week to the sound of thunder, how far off I sat and wondered, started humming a song from 1982, ain't it funny how the night moves when you havent anything left to loose, with autom moving in. sorry love I had to say that.

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@twinflame2
21 Years500+ Posts

James tate thanks for the response to the peom. I understand that you can not comment on the piece. I wrote it during a most upsetting and confusing time for me. Unrequited love is one of the most difficult things a person can face. Again thanks for your honesty, I do appreciate it.

TW2