@twinflame2
21 Years500+ Posts
I read your poem, There is a common thread in it that brings back memories I rather not recall. The work however is quite good. There is a powerfull feel to the poem, the words are to close to somethings in my life to give you a fair responce. sorry
James,
You have my heart!!! So have you heard any BS latey, That would be Bob Segar!!! You old Sot!!!
Glad you responded to tw2. You are a fine man. Prince Charles!!!
CG
funny I did awake one night last week to the sound of thunder, how far off I sat and wondered, started humming a song from 1982, ain't it funny how the night moves when you havent anything left to loose, with autom moving in. sorry love I had to say that.
James tate thanks for the response to the peom. I understand that you can not comment on the piece. I wrote it during a most upsetting and confusing time for me. Unrequited love is one of the most difficult things a person can face. Again thanks for your honesty, I do appreciate it.
TW2
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Hey all Candlegirl has read my poem Dare to Dream and sent me quite a nice response. I would like very much for the rest of you to give an opinion as well. (if you don't mind). I would be so grateful for the feedback ok. Waiting in suspense, bye for now.
Tw2