Heart Shaped Box...

I feel confined in my heart shaped box
Beating very slowly, fading fast....
There is no sunshine where I am....
Standing alone in the dark...
wandering how to escape this heart shaped box...

Cant eat, cant sleep, hard to find a way to smile...
I'd rather walk for miles...until exhaustion..
I thought you were the one.....now I know I was wrong...
to let you in for far too long......

I feel confined to this 4x4 box.
Heart beating slowly, fading....interwined in the past...
These flames that once burned so bright...
Standing alone in the dark with no sight of light....
I understand what needs to be done to escape....
This heart shaped box.....Am I strong enough?

What I feel is the lack of free will....
Contemplating, tragedy, memories....any good of you has faded...
back into this heart shaped box.....trapped...
dont want to feel jaded to get shaded...
Time to move on, but dont want to break...
your spirit, your happiness, your heart shaped box....

you should drop that in to the Writing Forum Crabby

Good prose.

I guess my question for you is:
Would you rather stand and feel the breeze on your face

Or

Kneel?

I mean all this figuratively of course, but given your poem. I think you will get my meaning.

....it's better to die on your feet than live on your knees...
P Garret

Posted by aPiscesPrincess
Is that a poem you wrote?
It's really beautiful. But sad too 😢

Yes, and ty very much! I appreciate you!

Posted by ReallyNiceAriesPerson
you should drop that in to the Writing Forum Crabby

ty will do!

Posted by Awakened
Good prose.

I guess my question for you is:
Would you rather stand and feel the breeze on your face

Or

Kneel?

I mean all this figuratively of course, but given your poem. I think you will get my meaning.

Feeling the breeze on my face sounds like pure freedom......

Posted by ReallyNiceAriesPerson
....it's better to die on your feet than live on your knees...
P Garret

Very great quote!!!!!!!!! (War)

yeah i really like this

they're like really excellent lyrics —

Posted by nimbue
yeah i really like this

they're like really excellent lyrics —

Thank you, a student of mines was a muse.....

Posted by oldskoolflavor
the fuck is this ?!?
where can I get the ebonix version ?

Did you graduate highschool? It's elementary watson....
maybe you left it next to your porn tapes and lotion.....
you poor bastard....lmao!!!!!!!!!!!

your maso'chistic to keep fucking with me......or you have absolutely no brain or life....

get an education dude seriously!