Feels of true love Taurus Edition

Its something we wrote, with the help of my taurean friend who has a love for literature, poems and astrology, told from a bull's POV when falling in love (true love). We were bored as af and she started pushing me to do something productive for once, try doing some writing/lit stuff since im gemini yada yada and since i envy the way a taurus loves soooo i thought why not? Its not a poem....well, idek what it is, it doesnt even rhyme.....Feel free to correct me if i'm wrong:

"This isn't like me
I can't calm down at all.
I have some sort of special anticipation for you.
I've lost control what to do now?
I almost can't leave you.

Our conversation is very simple
why is my heartbeat so abnormal
Every movement in front of you
I can easily be seen through
Because I'm lost in the sea of your gaze

The armor on my heart breaks down for you
Only left with my naked confession
My love with no defense
My emotionless mask breaks down for you
All of my expressions have revealed
my adoration for you.
I wont regret anything, even if i'm hurt.
Just want you to rely on me."

Posted by aftershine
Its something we wrote, with the help of my taurean friend who has a love for literature, poems and astrology, told from a bull's POV when falling in love (true love). We were bored as af and she started pushing me to do something productive for once, try doing some writing/lit stuff since im gemini yada yada and since i envy the way a taurus loves soooo i thought why not? Its not a poem....well, idek what it is, it doesnt even rhyme.....Feel free to correct me if i'm wrong:

"This isn't like me
I can't calm down at all.
I have some sort of special anticipation for you.
I've lost control what to do now?
I almost can't leave you.

Our conversation is very simple
why is my heartbeat so abnormal
Every movement in front of you
I can easily be seen through
Because I'm lost in the sea of your gaze

The armor on my heart breaks down for you
Only left with my naked confession
My love with no defense
My emotionless mask breaks down for you
All of my expressions have revealed
my adoration for you.
I wont regret anything, even if i'm hurt.
Just want you to rely on me."

Very nice poem.

@TaurusBull1977 thank you 🙂

Posted by TaurusBull1977

Posted by aftershine
Its something we wrote, with the help of my taurean friend who has a love for literature, poems and astrology, told from a bull's POV when falling in love (true love). We were bored as af and she started pushing me to do something productive for once, try doing some writing/lit stuff since im gemini yada yada and since i envy the way a taurus loves soooo i thought why not? Its not a poem....well, idek what it is, it doesnt even rhyme.....Feel free to correct me if i'm wrong:

"This isn't like me
I can't calm down at all.
I have some sort of special anticipation for you.
I've lost control what to do now?
I almost can't leave you.

Our conversation is very simple
why is my heartbeat so abnormal
Every movement in front of you
I can easily be seen through
Because I'm lost in the sea of your gaze

The armor on my heart breaks down for you
Only left with my naked confession
My love with no defense
My emotionless mask breaks down for you
All of my expressions have revealed
my adoration for you.
I wont regret anything, even if i'm hurt.
Just want you to rely on me."

Very nice poem.

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Yep, that is exactly how I feel now! so very true 😄

I'm a Taurus poet myself. A foolish one. I really enjoy reading and writing metaphors and simile. If I knew more about astronomy I would be writing all day.