Untouched Past

So vague
So gone
So distant
All dissolved in an instant
Feelings; Emotions once
Fully present
No more problems
No more fights
No more stress-ing
Miss it?
Not really
Miss her?
Yes truly
The vivid past
Fully gone
At last

Our love's mystery
A part of history
Time apart
A pause?
For what cause?
Clear minds
Wasted times
Into thin air
This wasn't fair
Not by choice
Listen to my voice
"Time's to blame,
It wasn't a game"

How will it be?
When eyes can see
Brokenhearts in casts of
Painful pasts
Will it be different?
For the good?
How's your mood?
For the bad?
Please don't be mad
Irritating confusion
It isn't an illusion
Oh, but it is.
Go, leave me in bliss
STOP IT
Get away!
Bodies shove
Bodies sway

Seasons change
And so do we
No more you
No more me
& it is true
Out of sight
Out of mind
Nowhere to look
Nowhere to find
With cold shoulders
& stacked boulders
Building of our walls
Standing tall...
...Moving on
Wasn't a burden after all.

Lol He's not the only one with the luring poetry, besides I think his poetry is different compared to mine.

With that out of the way, what did you think CluelessCancer? What did you get out if it?
I'm trying to get some feedback since the writing forum seems to have favorites.

Come on my fellow Virgos (Or anyone else with an opinion for that matter) give me something to work with.

I like it. Cant emotionally attach to it because my last relationship that was that intimate was with my ex-wife and those feelings are looooong gone. Good poem though. Think they would be good lyrics for a song actually. Keep on creating homie.

Posted by Joshmoe
I like it. Cant emotionally attach to it because my last relationship that was that intimate was with my ex-wife and those feelings are looooong gone. Good poem though. Think they would be good lyrics for a song actually. Keep on creating homie.

Good looking. Thanks for the feedback.

Posted by virgology83
🙂 welcome back decan!!

I'm not decan.