Destiny

I embrace my aloneness
I was thrust into its cold, dark grip
Shrouded

There was once one I truly loved
She beckoned me
I was left broken
Crushed

There was another
One who could heal me
Make me whole again
But she is so far away
Unreachable

I embrace my aloneness
My destiny

Oh dof. This is good, and very sad. xx

your only as alone as you want to be.....

If that's what you want your destiny to be,

then so be it.....

great poem though.....

Fuck your aloneness
that's not how it's going to be
Goose

You only thought you loved her
It was just a practice run
And you had to let her go
Vamos

There is another
A better one
who will make you whole again
she seems far away
but she is getting
Closer

make the most of your aloneness
cos it won't be lasting long
dofacc

if I ever see you
sprouting shit again
you will get a headbutt
that lands you in the casualty room
—hello nurse!??

oooooh - idea stolen from the Aries thread...

dofacc, your mission today which you will accept is to get hold of a copy (or download or upload or whatever one does to get music) of Mystify Me by INXS.
See if we can't just ease you gently back into Rocking Ram mode.

Dang, where is my INXS, hmmmm.....

I will dig it out, thanks for the thoughtfulness RNAP...

Actually, I have been thinking about the reason I have been writing my little "poems." It has occurred to me that I have more or less healed from all that emotional trauma. I have reached a point where I can stand far enough away from what I went through that I can examine it more or less objectively, and write down the feelings that I had.

Essentially, I feel much, much better. Rocking Ram it will be!!!!

Just stopped by to let you know you killed it on this one,your talented,thanks for sharing

QUITE WELL DONE