Hello to all! To start off let me say that I to have read one or two books about bad relationships. And alas I have had my heart torn asunder as we all have. I found quite by accident that release was found in writing for me. I read some poetry on one of the sites about lost love, after a nasty breakup I experienced. Anyway it seemed to spark a desire within myself to express my feelings on paper. And to my suprise it was published. I would like to share it with you if that would be ok. I welcome any and all comments on the piece, as I truly wish to have honest feedback on my work. It is quite a few verses, therefore I will place another opinion to share it with all of you. Well here goes, nothing ventured nothing gained they say. I'm going out on a limb here kids, sure hope the branch doesn't break. The few people I have shared it with say it is a good poem. And that it was good enough to be published before it was. So anyway enough running off at the mouth about it. Read it, hopefully enjoy it, but most of all give your feedback ok. "Strive to be happy and have a great day". Bye for now, Twinflame2.
