Drunk poem

As the nectar of unrestrain caresses my insides I daydream of your gaze.
All I have are memories, deep wounds whose gushing blood cant help but amaze.
How many have walked this path before me?,
How many have let go? And walked afterwards in glee?
Such an impossible feat...
How is this bitterness... how can I redemption meet?
I see the stars and cry,I finally let go.
Hoping that the heavens upon me, mercy bestow.
" A true smile who values my strenght."
"A warrior, that for love will walk no matter the lenght."
Tis all I ask, and in return I'll give my life.
I promise to smile in the face of all strife.
To greet all good and evil with open arms
And to lead a life that not a soul harms.
Give me my dream and I'll become of this world...
Give me my dream and all within me to the humbles masses I'll hurl.
Give me my dream....
Give me hope....


*God... if you're listening I place my deepest desire upon your hands. I place my smile upon the edge of your sword willing to give my all... just stop this never ending loneliness thats destoying me slowly... bring the one to my arms... show this beggar mercy****

*******drunk*********


*******I write this as a record, not an exhibition, those that are touched by this will mourn in silence the defeat that it represents, those that cant see ... I envy you*******

Awwww! (((HUG)))

There are a ton of spelling errors but I get that you were drunk 😉

On the other hand, you did a great thing here: put all that you can not control into the hands of a higher power and simply hope for the best.

How is it, to be "loved by God?' Do you feel fortunate? Protected? Important? Grateful?

Posted by StillWater

Posted by Undine
How is it, to be "loved by God?' Do you feel fortunate? Protected? Important? Grateful?

Yes and you don't feel alone.

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Halleluijah!!! For once I agree with StillWater LOL!!!

That was indeed meant to be a Hallelujah!!!