CHALLENGE

This topic was created in the Scorpio forum by alcheme on Saturday, January 20, 2007 and has 6 replies.

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@alcheme
19 Years1,000+ PostsScorpio

Life, I challenge you to try me,
Doom me to unending pain;
Stay my hand, becloud my vision,
Break my heart and then?_again.

Shatter every dream I've cherished,
Fill my heart with ruthless fear;
Follow every smile that cheers me
With a bitter, blinding tear.

Thus I dare you; you can try me,
Seek to make me cringe and moan,
Still my unbound soul defies you,
I'll withstand you?_and, alone!

Jean Nette.

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@Yama
20 Years5,000+ PostsScorpio

"I am not too familiar with My Chemical Romance,"

You have no idea how jealous you just made me.

"Have you ever seen Mystic Fish's profile. I thought I was going to vomit. That was a emo faggot collage right there. And that Linkin Park video just put me into a cringe overload"

Not that I recall. Are Linkin Park even together anymore?

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@alcheme
19 Years1,000+ PostsScorpio

Message posted by: branh0913 on 1/21/2007 8:04:16 AM ip: xxx.xxx.xxx.2
"Did you write that Alceme? If so, it was pretty good. It had a pretty good flow. Some of the wording is cliche, but it was effective at least"

No, I didn't write it. I am creatively inept... I like to collect poems, and was trying to pick one for my profile, but thought some people might like some of them. So, I posted a few that I didn't end up using...