A virgo's Poem

I wrote this poem recently i would like to know what you folks think of it it flowed from the top of my head while i was on my crackberry lol

I'm lonely but not being by oneself but drowning in my own fear of not having anybody to help me stand on my feet wen my knees are weak I guess dis is call emptiness for real but I won't make a deal with tha devil I wonder if hell is hotter den a tea kettle

Are u okay? sounds like you're going through something. Brooklyn must be a hard life.. lol

nope i'm good i write about alot of things about life with my poetry and besides i just graduated from high school what tha hell i have to be sad about something.

life is gravy even with out mash potatoes lmao

i love my puns

well hey it doesn't sound too bad then, you got that whole rhyme thing going' lol

thank you lol

I think this has to do with the individuality of the Virgo and our lack of ability to relate with the other signs.
We aren't prone to like groups or follow fashion, thus, we don't really feel like we fit in.

I used to write stuff like that back in the day.

http://blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.view&friendId=63097457&blogId=332517617

LOl interesting b/c out of my group of friends I'm the "weird/ unique" one... Idk if it's a virgo thing or not but I can honestly say that a lot of things I do I do it in very unconventional ways