Don
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21 YearsSagittarius
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A poem
Yours?
Yeah.
Your poem needs Prozac.
Very good, I say.
Sounds like "heaven"...heaven in your mind, heaven on earth...wherever, whatever...it is good!
Thank you for sharing,
Freebird
Thank you for sharing,
Freebird
Hear! Hear! I say very good also! Thanks for sharing Don it takes strenght to put yourself out there like that. And Morganofmind just what do you mean his poem needs prozac? I dont quite get it, did you not care for the piece? Well anyway good day to all, hope yours is going great. Bye for now gotta run...busy, busy day.
nice....
Kudos...
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I'd be interested to read more of your stuff, if you're willing to share.
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Holy butter.
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The world just seems to fall away
I hear the angels sing
Grief and pain just disappear
My world is mine again
And for that single moment
I can live without an end
I dive and soar and swoop above
The chains that held me low
A strange new joy takes hold of me
A joy I'd die to know
In this place no hurts appear
No fear is to be found
And so it stays until the time
I fall back to the ground