A poem

This topic was created in the Writing ✍️ forum by Don on Saturday, July 10, 2004 and has 8 replies.

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21 YearsSagittarius

In the dawning silence
I can hear the phantom ring
The world just seems to fall away
I hear the angels sing

Grief and pain just disappear
My world is mine again
And for that single moment
I can live without an end

I dive and soar and swoop above
The chains that held me low
A strange new joy takes hold of me
A joy I'd die to know

In this place no hurts appear
No fear is to be found
And so it stays until the time
I fall back to the ground

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21 Years500+ Posts

Hear! Hear! I say very good also! Thanks for sharing Don it takes strenght to put yourself out there like that. And Morganofmind just what do you mean his poem needs prozac? I dont quite get it, did you not care for the piece? Well anyway good day to all, hope yours is going great. Bye for now gotta run...busy, busy day.