IDENTITY; A Short Poem

Is it safe to be lost
All tired and tossed
In the midst of some other's dream?
To loose I, Mine and Me?
Only YOU do I see,
Till I've lost all Identity?

And then a day comes along
I no longer belong
'cause you've fished someone else from the stream.
And the waters of waste
Run down my face
Washing the me back to me.

So your hope is your salad
I think more of the ballad
But everyone has there own dream

I express how I feel
whether phantom or real
and I whisper more than I scream

If a work can evoke
laughter or hope
it's done it's job it would seem.

Thanks Archer(Blushung) for the nice compliment

she says, "wake up its no use pretending"
i'll keep stealing, breathing her
birds are leaving over autumn's ending
one of us will die inside these arms
eyes wide open, naked as we came
one will spread our ashes around the yard

she says , "if i leave before you, darling
don't you waste me in the ground"
i lay smiling like our sleeping children
one of us will die inside these arms
eyes wide open, naked as we came


-Sam Beam

Molten are our bodies
while enemies approaching
bombs quake beneath us
in each other's arms
welcome death to come
transcend heavenward
away from bloodshed
life with dignaty lost
where sorrow has no hold
to everlasting dance
among the clouds we'll fly

Thanks Brahn.....what a nice compliment, but I took the lead of whitton and archer, your input was very nice too.....along with everyone elses input, it is really wonderful to watch this and other threads evolve for all's enjoyment.

You Guys are TALENTED!!!!! BRAVVO!!! Plus I love your depth....here's one for you I'll call "Passion Engaged"

Inspiration...
You are
To Me.

A rainbow of enthusiastic light
Carresed by the colors of my sunset.
A pleasant breeze of wishes granted
A gentile mist of earth's finest desire.

A scent of starlight splashed upon my heavens.
A waterfall, pure with sparkling passions.
An angel engaged in soaring me to pleasure.
A free-falling feather to bring me back down.

Your velvet carress, and
Soul touching sighs
Complete ME.

rockchick...you really are feeling down aren't you...


for me down time does help me to refocus and decide that if I'm not happy, I need to accept that I played a part in my current condition and I need to play a part of changing it for the better, be it personal or global situations.

((hug)) I hope you feel better soon!

" we always seem to have something to complain about..."

well, maybe not always, but you're right, if I look hard enough I can get real down real fast, but also, I could choose to see how fortunate I am compared to ppl that really suffer with physical pain or the anquish of war...

Yeah, I don't like animal cages either, but without that, you might not be able to eat as affordably as you do...I like to buy organic cage free eggs, but it costs almost $ 4 a dz!.....the fact is most of the meat you eat has been confined in order to make it feasible, both for you and the grower...

"im not a crazy vegetarian, just when i dnt agreee in something i tend to make a stand for myself"

Good for you.....and for the animals....I have a lot of animals I care for and I try to always make decisions that would make them happy...

What are your favorite animals..

"Even then, I consider human nature...if you want animal cruelty to end...you need to elimiate the human race..."

I consider the human race as a two legged animal pack...well about half of'em have three legs.. 🙂

Rats? Eewwww.....but they are disease ridden refuse eaters?

If you decide to care for a rat....would you let it free to roam—

Actually my nephew has a pet rat and he did tell me she is very clean and extremely intelligent...I guess I have a pre-determined idea that's hard for me to let go of.

Do you like horses?

Well......cheers to you....tally ho and all that 🙂

It sounds like you have strong character and drive, you'll do well to follow your passion about animals and working with them.

Ooops, are we threading on faux pas again....

Well, I suppose, this should stay a poem/song writing thread....so do you wanna write art or talk Dr Zooz?

So I say let's follow db's advice and start a new one...k?

hmmmmmm, well, you could write about your passion for animals?

well, I'm streching ideas 4 u, do you like to take pictures? doesn't cost much with digital.

ODE TO THE HORSE....Ronald Duncan

Where in this world can man find nobility without pride,
friendship without envy, or beauty without vanity.
Here, where grace is laced with muscle,
and strength by gentleness confined.
He serves without servility, has fought without enmity.
There is nothing so powerful, nothing less violent,
nothing as quick, nothing more patient
The world's past has been borne on his back.
We are his heirs, he is our inheritence.
The Horse.

what I was thinking, you can buy one on ebay for pretty cheap, or maybe you can find a used one locally.

You could do a book for enthisiast with lots of pictures and a depiction of what the animals are thinkin...true animal lovers can "read" the non-verbal communication, and actually, some animals are hillarious.....

That might be ythe trick....good luck!