Luz
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the edge of the world
Recognition
We smiled then at eachother. IT wasn't much, but we had one thing we could keep. We both knew that if we ever came to the world's edge, we'd probably jump off, just to see where we'd land. I think that smile might have been a promise, maybe. We would meet at the end of things... We'd come back after the world's end, at the world's end, and jump together. I wonder how long we'd fall before we hit the ground, where ever the ground was we'd hit, or even if we hit any ground at all. It was a good possibility that there wouldn't be any. Still, I think we've already been falling for a long time while the world took it's time to crumble around us. Maybe, then, at the end of things, we wouldn't have to jump. Maybe everything else will fall away, and we'd be the only one's left standing. It's a thought we shared a smile at.
We smiled then at eachother. IT wasn't much, but we had one thing we could keep. We both knew that if we ever came to the world's edge, we'd probably jump off, just to see where we'd land. I think that smile might have been a promise, maybe. We would meet at the end of things... We'd come back after the world's end, at the world's end, and jump together. I wonder how long we'd fall before we hit the ground, where ever the ground was we'd hit, or even if we hit any ground at all. It was a good possibility that there wouldn't be any. Still, I think we've already been falling for a long time while the world took it's time to crumble around us. Maybe, then, at the end of things, we wouldn't have to jump. Maybe everything else will fall away, and we'd be the only one's left standing. It's a thought we shared a smile at.
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