@RedShoes
9 Years
My first lengthy attempt at writing a personal narrative (English Homework)
Posted by aquanib
Why are you studying English?
To be able to effectively rot here. Though Gemitati is doing a perfectly fine job rotting so there's probably no reading comprehension needed
Posted by aquanib
Didn't read, but it's probably 3.5/10. 😄
Typical discriminative aqua. Don't blame you tbh. I wouldn't bother reading a wall of text on an astrology forum either
Typical discriminative aqua. Don't blame you tbh. I wouldn't bother reading a wall of text on an astrology forum either
That's not so much the problem atm. It's just when i saw the description "sea of adjectives" i got somewhat less enthusiastic lol.
Then i read about a hooker that plays music aloud for two years and noone stops her. Found that kinda unrealistic.
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It's true. Thank god I don't live there anymore
Why did I post this
I feel naked
Posted by cvurko
Show it. Show it now.
ok
will be up for ten minutes, no more. And I'll hide it forever, don't quote it
Thank fucking god for DXP. People validated the shit out of me for writing this text. So I decided to ask the folks on here and I'm not surprised that the feedback is completely different. I wish people were as honest irl as they dare to be to online strangers
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Read it and be grateful, peasants