@HappyCapper
11 Years5,000+ Posts
Hack away!
Posted by whatthecrab
This one is easy to understand. The poem is about fantasy vs reality, right? Going after what you dream(/goals) off.
Thank you so much for your input! I won't tell you if you're right or wrong (at least, not yet), in case I get more views on it.🙂
Posted by HappyCapper
Realised that I would like to hear what people think about my little poem - just curious as to how people read it, as I am notorious for writing poems which are not always easily understood. You can be as harsh as you like as long as you're honest and constructive.Life in a soap bubble is sweet.
All the colours and shapes swirl
Change
No one dares to enter, just in case
The bubble would burst.
Nice!
Yearning
Peer pressure leading to substance abuse?click to expand
Thank you so much for your input!🙂
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Realised that I would like to hear what people think about my little poem - just curious as to how people read it, as I am notorious for writing poems which are not always easily understood. You can be as harsh as you like as long as you're honest and constructive.
Life in a soap bubble is sweet.
All the colours and shapes swirl
Change
No one dares to enter, just in case
The bubble would burst.