Hey Phoenix Rising-Give an update-ok

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twinflame2
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Oh I see Phoenix, sorry the company may not be a good one to deal with. As I said before I had an experience myself with just such a company. Never did get my $ 20.00 back from them either. Anyway it sounds like you have made a good decision about it all. I did enjoy your poem as you have true tallent. Please keep me posted as I am interested in how things go for you. Gotta go to bed now I am up truly to late tonight, just could not sleep well. bye TW2
Velvet whispers
Inaudible murmuring
Stifled secrets

Indigo shadows veil desperation
Obscuring desire

In a lucid azure dream
I found you

Under a sapphire sky.
phoenix_rising
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Well, it so happens that I was asked my permission to dedicate 2 whole pages to me in an upcoming book called The International Who's Who of Poetry with one of the pages being my poem and the other page being a biography of me. Woohoo! (Hopefully it's n
phoenix_rising
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I'd be interested to read more of your stuff, if you're willing to share.
phoenix_rising
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A Maiden
Sara Teasdale

Oh if I were the velvet rose
Upon the red rose vine,
I'd climb to touch his window
And make his casement fine.

And if I were the little bird
That twitters on the tree,
All day I'd si
phoenix_rising
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Holy butter.
Morganofmind
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Some people are so shy about what they write, they won't share it...

I ask: why do you write if not to be read?
Morganofmind
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I'm suffering from a little writers block. I'd would *appreciate* any help given by the inspiration dxpians. The piece is humor.

What would a good break-up speech sound like if it is heard over the answering machine? I want her to be cold and s
Gwendylyn Post
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Have been away for a few days & haven't checked in. I am going to the local "book mine" tomorrow & will look for your suggestion. Sounds like something I'd enjoy! For me, besides dialogue, it's all about the characters & how the author describes them. Wil
Sgirl122
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You will not tame this sea
either by humility or rapture.
But you can laugh
in its face.

Laughter
was invented by those
who live briefly
as a burst of laughter.

The eternal sea
will never learn to laugh.
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Morganofmind
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