love note

This topic was created in the Writing ✍️ forum by nimbue on Monday, September 26, 2011 and has 6 replies.

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see our hands come together in the gloom? i to you, you to me and so we collide seamlessly.

there's no secret to the mystery

our souls try to sow the seeds of a lasting union

so we rush to beat the impending tide

drawn out breaths, we fall endlessly into the vapour of chance

risks that pay off, a first kiss, a last dance

i promised to wait in the breathless dark.

and now time is stilted; no slurs, no waves. i for you and you for me

taming the libido took paitence

how glad i am you're here with me

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i just remembered posting this! um i was stoned when i wrote it, so *ahem*

but, awesome feedback!

articlel-i'm thinking he'd like it. sent him a dumb poem the other day and he loved it, lol. 'your kisses are delicious, your hair smells of peaches. i want to eat your hair' lmao

vb-thankyou so much. i enjoyed writing it 🙂

arijekt-awww really? thank you hun!

midnitestar-thank you 🙂 i was thinking it wasn't that great, but at least it reads ok lol

impresswho-you think?! i'd probably die of shyness, lol! that's a hot idea though...*thoughtful face* i bet you're an aries...am i right? 😄

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Posted by nimbue
i just remembered posting this! um i was stoned when i wrote it, so *ahem*

articlel-i'm thinking he'd like it. sent him a dumb poem the other day and he loved it, lol. 'your kisses are delicious, your hair smells of peaches. i want to eat your hair' lmao

Muhahahahahahahahahahhaaha.