Bunny Songwriter

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Yes, I do write songs but only occasionally. I'm good with finding rhyming words and stuff.

The first song I've ever written was for an Capqua girl way back May 2008. Initially, I was still asleep when my mind was humming something. When I woke up, I wrote the song and finished.

Within the next 6 days, I wrote two more songs. Still for the Capqua girl. One is in my local dialect.

In January 2015, I wrote another song. It's a gospel song which I recorded on my phone. It's still in the works. I think I still need to make some changes.

Then just this afternoon, I wrote another song for my hometown, which I will post in this thread.

I need your comments and suggestions. Thanks in advance!
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Who would ever ignore

A city beaming with beauty?

Who would ever ignore

A place where locals are friendly?

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

With landscapes panoramic

Its ambience so romantic

And delicacies fantastic!

So would you now go to Legazpi,

The City of Fun and Adventure?

So would you now go to Legazpi,

To taste its spicy culinary culture?

Book a flight, Take the bus

Or drive down to this city

Break free and escape

For once, have an escapade!

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place comely in so many ways

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place of elegance and grace...
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I still think I need to add one or two stanzas. Legazpi has so much more to offer than the ones already mentioned above.

It still doesn't have a melody... but my office mate knows a really good music teacher who can help us give it melody.

I'm thinking that its musical genre must be JAZZ or BLUES. I think it will be good to play it at some hotel or fine-dining restaurant.
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Posted by firebunny
I still think I need to add one or two stanzas. Legazpi has so much more to offer than the ones already mentioned above.

It still doesn't have a melody... but my office mate knows a really good music teacher who can help us give it melody.

I'm thinking that its musical genre must be JAZZ or BLUES. I think it will be good to play it at some hotel or fine-dining restaurant.



just make Legazpi, The Opera.
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Edited version

Who could ever ignore

A city beaming with beauty?

Who could ever ignore

A place where locals are friendly?

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

With landscapes panoramic

Ambience quite romantic

And delicacies fantastic!

So would you now go to Legazpi,

The City of Fun and Adventure?

So would you now go to Legazpi,

To taste its spicy culinary culture?

Book a flight, Take the bus

Or drive down to this city

Break free and escape

For once, have an escapade!

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place comely in so many ways

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place of elegance and grace...
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You don't need to end rhyme.

It's far easier to use multi syllables in one line.

Compounds the song and makes it easy to ride a beat.
Thank you. I'm doing a Director's Message for an event next week so I don't have time to google what multi syllables mean. Care to explain? Thanks.
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You don't have time to google but you had been here for hours now...

What is really wrong with you?
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.

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I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.
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But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
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Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon

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No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!
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Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
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Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!

Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛

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I apparently missed that 'fun'...
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!

Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛


I apparently missed that 'fun'...
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? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?
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Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!

Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛


I apparently missed that 'fun'...
? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?
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He is about 2 years late! That was an ass!!! Now...its ma'am! Lol
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!

Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛


I apparently missed that 'fun'...
? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?
He is about 2 years late! That was an ass!!! Now...its ma'am! Lol
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Haha! 2!?? He's 10 years late. He's nearing 40 now
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Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by Teena
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by hydorah
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...



You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.


I am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!

Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.

No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.

Thanks.

But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon


No! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!

I hope notes were made!

Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛


Teenafag
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Song for genitalia and teena

Who could ever ignore

A gem made of tati

Who could even snore

At her posts so funny

Gemitati a no engrishcel

With plenty of stories to tell

Ambulance quite frantic

When this old lady gets epileptic

So would you follow gemitati

And get 3 abortions

So would you follow gemitati

And bang married scorpions

Who is on the bus?

Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus

She says she is not a teletubby

But wears purple and dances with firebunny

BRB Scorpios past 30

Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp

Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig

Scrubbing people's feet is her gig

LOL!!! I don't know how you're coming up with the names....Patel can't be Singh Ands??

And @Gemitati !!
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I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...

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I'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.

Legazpi has beautiful panoramic landscape and, along with the rest of the region, has a unique culinary heritage. Most of our delicacies are characterized by the heavy use of coconut milk and chili peppers. It turns out though that 6/10 of the best-rated restaurants in the region are found here; 5 of which promote the local cuisine and serve local delicacies.
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Posted by firebunny
Who would ever ignore

A city beaming with beauty?

Who would ever ignore

A place where locals are friendly?

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

With landscapes panoramic

Its ambience so romantic

And delicacies fantastic!

So would you now go to Legazpi,

The City of Fun and Adventure?

So would you now go to Legazpi,

To taste its spicy culinary culture?

Book a flight, Take the bus

Or drive down to this city

Break free and escape

For once, have an escapade!

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place comely in so many ways

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place of elegance and grace...

This would be a good jingle for Legazpi tourism board's ad.
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Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena

Who could ever ignore

A gem made of tati

Who could even snore

At her posts so funny

Gemitati a no engrishcel

With plenty of stories to tell

Ambulance quite frantic

When this old lady gets epileptic

So would you follow gemitati

And get 3 abortions

So would you follow gemitati

And bang married scorpions

Who is on the bus?

Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus

She says she is not a teletubby

But wears purple and dances with firebunny

BRB Scorpios past 30

Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp

Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig

Scrubbing people's feet is her gig

LOL!!! I don't know how you're coming up with the names....Patel can't be Singh Ands??

And @Gemitati !!


Patel can't be Singh ands
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Posted by firebunny
Who would ever ignore

A city beaming with beauty?

Who would ever ignore

A place where locals are friendly?

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

With landscapes panoramic

Its ambience so romantic

And delicacies fantastic!

So would you now go to Legazpi,

The City of Fun and Adventure?

So would you now go to Legazpi,

To taste its spicy culinary culture?

Book a flight, Take the bus

Or drive down to this city

Break free and escape

For once, have an escapade!

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place comely in so many ways

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place of elegance and grace...

This would be a good jingle for Legazpi tourism board's ad.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena

Who could ever ignore

A gem made of tati

Who could even snore

At her posts so funny

Gemitati a no engrishcel

With plenty of stories to tell

Ambulance quite frantic

When this old lady gets epileptic

So would you follow gemitati

And get 3 abortions

So would you follow gemitati

And bang married scorpions

Who is on the bus?

Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus

She says she is not a teletubby

But wears purple and dances with firebunny

BRB Scorpios past 30

Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp

Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig

Scrubbing people's feet is her gig
Lmao. You're funny, dude. 😆
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sorry I don't have any suggestions in writing music when it comes to lyrics. every now and then when me and my girl have our little arguments, I'll go somewhere to calm down and come back minutes later and ask if she want me to sing her a song on the guitar to make her feel better. I only say that to try and cheer her up a little and hope to even make her laugh. but I'm not good when it comes to writing lyrics. I can only write instrumental music without words.
Is she still there?
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Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena

Who could ever ignore

A gem made of tati

Who could even snore

At her posts so funny

Gemitati a no engrishcel

With plenty of stories to tell

Ambulance quite frantic

When this old lady gets epileptic

So would you follow gemitati

And get 3 abortions

So would you follow gemitati

And bang married scorpions

Who is on the bus?

Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus

She says she is not a teletubby

But wears purple and dances with firebunny

BRB Scorpios past 30

Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp

Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig

Scrubbing people's feet is her gig
Lol! I've almost missed it!!!

That's kind of strange so I have to think what to say...doesn't happen to me often...I mean think before I say stuff...

I'll be back! Lol
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Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena

Who could ever ignore

A gem made of tati

Who could even snore

At her posts so funny

Gemitati a no engrishcel

With plenty of stories to tell

Ambulance quite frantic

When this old lady gets epileptic

So would you follow gemitati

And get 3 abortions

So would you follow gemitati

And bang married scorpions

Who is on the bus?

Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus

She says she is not a teletubby

But wears purple and dances with firebunny

BRB Scorpios past 30

Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp

Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig

Scrubbing people's feet is her gig
Lol! I've almost missed it!!!

That's kind of strange so I have to think what to say...doesn't happen to me often...I mean think before I say stuff...

I'll be back! Lol
I got lazy to parody the last verse
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Whatever you do - just don't let bus hit you! Lol
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Who could ever ignore

A city beaming with beauty?

Who could ever ignore

A place where locals are friendly?

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

With landscapes panoramic

Ambience quite romantic

And delicacies fantastic!

So would you now go to Legazpi,

The City of Fun and Adventure?

So would you now go to Legazpi,

To taste its spicy culinary culture?

Book a flight, Take the bus

Or drive down to this city

Break free and escape

For once, have an escapade!

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place comely in so many ways

Legazpi, a city by the Pacific

A place of elegance and grace...



It sounds like an ad. This is a place I think you love so how did it make you feel?
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Posted by firebunny
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...


I'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.

Legazpi has beautiful panoramic landscape and, along with the rest of the region, has a unique culinary heritage. Most of our delicacies are characterized by the heavy use of coconut milk and chili peppers. It turns out though that 6/10 of the best-rated restaurants in the region are found here; 5 of which promote the local cuisine and serve local delicacies.
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So otjers tourists places!
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Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
Posted by Gemitati
Posted by firebunny
@_@
I still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...

As everywhere else...and lights!

Like everywhere else...


I'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.

Legazpi has beautiful panoramic landscape and, along with the rest of the region, has a unique culinary heritage. Most of our delicacies are characterized by the heavy use of coconut milk and chili peppers. It turns out though that 6/10 of the best-rated restaurants in the region are found here; 5 of which promote the local cuisine and serve local delicacies.
So otjers tourists places!

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No! Legazpi is different! Right, Ands? 🙂