
firebunny
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Posted by firebunny
I still think I need to add one or two stanzas. Legazpi has so much more to offer than the ones already mentioned above.
It still doesn't have a melody... but my office mate knows a really good music teacher who can help us give it melody.
I'm thinking that its musical genre must be JAZZ or BLUES. I think it will be good to play it at some hotel or fine-dining restaurant.





Posted by WeedsThank you. I'm doing a Director's Message for an event next week so I don't have time to google what multi syllables mean. Care to explain? Thanks.
You don't need to end rhyme.
It's far easier to use multi syllables in one line.
Compounds the song and makes it easy to ride a beat.


Posted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@

Posted by firebunnyYou don't have time to google but you had been here for hours now...Posted by WeedsThank you. I'm doing a Director's Message for an event next week so I don't have time to google what multi syllables mean. Care to explain? Thanks.
You don't need to end rhyme.
It's far easier to use multi syllables in one line.
Compounds the song and makes it easy to ride a beat.click to expand

Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
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Posted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
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Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.click to expand

Posted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
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Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!click to expand

Posted by TeenaI apparently missed that 'fun'...Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!
Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
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Posted by Gemitati? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?Posted by TeenaI apparently missed that 'fun'...Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!
Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
click to expand

Posted by TeenaHe is about 2 years late! That was an ass!!! Now...its ma'am! LolPosted by Gemitati? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?Posted by TeenaI apparently missed that 'fun'...Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!
Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
click to expand

Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaHe is about 2 years late! That was an ass!!! Now...its ma'am! LolPosted by Gemitati? Just saying he's an a $ $ hoe ?Posted by TeenaI apparently missed that 'fun'...Posted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!
Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
click to expand

Posted by MrEmptyBackpackPosted by TeenaTeenafagPosted by GemitatiPosted by TeenaNo! No no nobody Asian men is calling me nothing but Maaam!Posted by GemitatiPosted by hydorahI am not into Asians...I've heard about sizes...not that it matters!Posted by GemitatiPosted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
You will visit when you adopt new asian son fitebunny.
Oh! Son? My head isn't gutter.
No, no Asian sons even! Specially talentless songwriters!!! Even talented.
Thanks.
But Ands is an Asian Gemi n he calls you mon
I hope notes were made!
Hahah!! Next time he calls you mom chew him up n spit him out 😛
click to expand

Posted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena
Who could ever ignore
A gem made of tati
Who could even snore
At her posts so funny
Gemitati a no engrishcel
With plenty of stories to tell
Ambulance quite frantic
When this old lady gets epileptic
So would you follow gemitati
And get 3 abortions
So would you follow gemitati
And bang married scorpions
Who is on the bus?
Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus
She says she is not a teletubby
But wears purple and dances with firebunny
BRB Scorpios past 30
Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp
Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig
Scrubbing people's feet is her gig

Posted by GemitatiI'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.Posted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
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Posted by firebunnyThis would be a good jingle for Legazpi tourism board's ad.
Who would ever ignore
A city beaming with beauty?
Who would ever ignore
A place where locals are friendly?
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
With landscapes panoramic
Its ambience so romantic
And delicacies fantastic!
So would you now go to Legazpi,
The City of Fun and Adventure?
So would you now go to Legazpi,
To taste its spicy culinary culture?
Book a flight, Take the bus
Or drive down to this city
Break free and escape
For once, have an escapade!
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place comely in so many ways
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place of elegance and grace...

Posted by MrEmptyBackpack?Posted by TeenaPatel can't be Singh andsPosted by MrEmptyBackpack
Song for genitalia and teena
Who could ever ignore
A gem made of tati
Who could even snore
At her posts so funny
Gemitati a no engrishcel
With plenty of stories to tell
Ambulance quite frantic
When this old lady gets epileptic
So would you follow gemitati
And get 3 abortions
So would you follow gemitati
And bang married scorpions
Who is on the bus?
Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus
She says she is not a teletubby
But wears purple and dances with firebunny
BRB Scorpios past 30
Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp
Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig
Scrubbing people's feet is her gig
LOL!!! I don't know how you're coming up with the names....Patel can't be Singh Ands??
And @Gemitati !!
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Posted by DepthAndDeathThank you. 🙂Posted by firebunnyThis would be a good jingle for Legazpi tourism board's ad.
Who would ever ignore
A city beaming with beauty?
Who would ever ignore
A place where locals are friendly?
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
With landscapes panoramic
Its ambience so romantic
And delicacies fantastic!
So would you now go to Legazpi,
The City of Fun and Adventure?
So would you now go to Legazpi,
To taste its spicy culinary culture?
Book a flight, Take the bus
Or drive down to this city
Break free and escape
For once, have an escapade!
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place comely in so many ways
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place of elegance and grace...click to expand

Posted by hydorahReally? Why do you say so?
I'm sure this will be the best opera ever made about legazpi



Posted by MrEmptyBackpackLmao. You're funny, dude. 😆
Song for genitalia and teena
Who could ever ignore
A gem made of tati
Who could even snore
At her posts so funny
Gemitati a no engrishcel
With plenty of stories to tell
Ambulance quite frantic
When this old lady gets epileptic
So would you follow gemitati
And get 3 abortions
So would you follow gemitati
And bang married scorpions
Who is on the bus?
Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus
She says she is not a teletubby
But wears purple and dances with firebunny
BRB Scorpios past 30
Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp
Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig
Scrubbing people's feet is her gig

Posted by TheTinManIs she still there?
sorry I don't have any suggestions in writing music when it comes to lyrics. every now and then when me and my girl have our little arguments, I'll go somewhere to calm down and come back minutes later and ask if she want me to sing her a song on the guitar to make her feel better. I only say that to try and cheer her up a little and hope to even make her laugh. but I'm not good when it comes to writing lyrics. I can only write instrumental music without words.

Posted by hydorahYou just had to be an ass!
I'm sure this will be the best opera ever made about legazpi

Posted by MrEmptyBackpackLol! I've almost missed it!!!
Song for genitalia and teena
Who could ever ignore
A gem made of tati
Who could even snore
At her posts so funny
Gemitati a no engrishcel
With plenty of stories to tell
Ambulance quite frantic
When this old lady gets epileptic
So would you follow gemitati
And get 3 abortions
So would you follow gemitati
And bang married scorpions
Who is on the bus?
Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus
She says she is not a teletubby
But wears purple and dances with firebunny
BRB Scorpios past 30
Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp
Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig
Scrubbing people's feet is her gig

Posted by firebunnyBecause the only one must be the best one! Do you have competition? So apploads! Don't quit day job though...Posted by hydorahReally? Why do you say so?
I'm sure this will be the best opera ever made about legazpiclick to expand

Posted by MrEmptyBackpackWhatever you do - just don't let bus hit you! LolPosted by GemitatiI got lazy to parody the last versePosted by MrEmptyBackpackLol! I've almost missed it!!!
Song for genitalia and teena
Who could ever ignore
A gem made of tati
Who could even snore
At her posts so funny
Gemitati a no engrishcel
With plenty of stories to tell
Ambulance quite frantic
When this old lady gets epileptic
So would you follow gemitati
And get 3 abortions
So would you follow gemitati
And bang married scorpions
Who is on the bus?
Teenakramvishnu Patel Singh is on the bus
She says she is not a teletubby
But wears purple and dances with firebunny
BRB Scorpios past 30
Wondering why they haven't found love on dxp
Busyeyes is george foreman in a wig
Scrubbing people's feet is her gig
That's kind of strange so I have to think what to say...doesn't happen to me often...I mean think before I say stuff...
I'll be back! Lolclick to expand

Posted by firebunny
Edited version
Who could ever ignore
A city beaming with beauty?
Who could ever ignore
A place where locals are friendly?
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
With landscapes panoramic
Ambience quite romantic
And delicacies fantastic!
So would you now go to Legazpi,
The City of Fun and Adventure?
So would you now go to Legazpi,
To taste its spicy culinary culture?
Book a flight, Take the bus
Or drive down to this city
Break free and escape
For once, have an escapade!
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place comely in so many ways
Legazpi, a city by the Pacific
A place of elegance and grace...

Posted by firebunnySo otjers tourists places!Posted by GemitatiI'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.Posted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
Legazpi has beautiful panoramic landscape and, along with the rest of the region, has a unique culinary heritage. Most of our delicacies are characterized by the heavy use of coconut milk and chili peppers. It turns out though that 6/10 of the best-rated restaurants in the region are found here; 5 of which promote the local cuisine and serve local delicacies.click to expand

Posted by GemitatiNo! Legazpi is different! Right, Ands? 🙂Posted by firebunnySo otjers tourists places!Posted by GemitatiI'm planning to come up with a promotional video with this as a song and it will show the beauty of our city.Posted by firebunnyI still don't know anything about your city except location and that there is food...
@_@
As everywhere else...and lights!
Like everywhere else...
Legazpi has beautiful panoramic landscape and, along with the rest of the region, has a unique culinary heritage. Most of our delicacies are characterized by the heavy use of coconut milk and chili peppers. It turns out though that 6/10 of the best-rated restaurants in the region are found here; 5 of which promote the local cuisine and serve local delicacies.
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The first song I've ever written was for an Capqua girl way back May 2008. Initially, I was still asleep when my mind was humming something. When I woke up, I wrote the song and finished.
Within the next 6 days, I wrote two more songs. Still for the Capqua girl. One is in my local dialect.
In January 2015, I wrote another song. It's a gospel song which I recorded on my phone. It's still in the works. I think I still need to make some changes.
Then just this afternoon, I wrote another song for my hometown, which I will post in this thread.
I need your comments and suggestions. Thanks in advance!