ode to Pisces woman

Gone swimming

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She is adjusting herself to the tides within me.

My waves

crash,

hollow out,

then settle.

She centers herself, moves her gaze into the center of my soul. She outlasted the waves.

She swims closer.

Violent waves are predicted in the forecast.

Free from tire, worry, and fear, she is almost there.

She is close to claiming what is rightfully hers.

Woah 😘 love it

Posted by wagtail
Woah 😘 love it

Thank you!

something in this ode still doesnt give me a good flow, i need to keep adjusting some words to make it sound right.

Posted by umisaid

Posted by wagtail
Woah 😘 love it

Thank you!

something in this ode still doesnt give me a good flow, i need to keep adjusting some words to make it sound right.

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I'll stay posted. I see what you mean I think. But it's very close - quite like the broken up sections - and the larger parts run together beautifully I think.

It reads like a plate or meal. In tasty smooshed together segments so... But the flavours are mixed. Enjoyed it 🙂

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Posted by umisaid

Posted by wagtail
Woah 😘 love it

Thank you!

something in this ode still doesnt give me a good flow, i need to keep adjusting some words to make it sound right.

I'll stay posted. I see what you mean I think. But it's very close - quite like the broken up sections - and the larger parts run together beautifully I think.

It reads like a plate or meal. In tasty smooshed together segments so... But the flavours are mixed. Enjoyed it 🙂

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thank you very much waggy, i changed it up a bit and i like it better. i plan to text her this in a bit.

Posted by MIIeFisk
a besotted bull is the sweetest thing to behold.

serious question, are all you Pisces this fantastic? So much love within you. I cannot believe it, how well she treats me.

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Posted by MIIeFisk
a besotted bull is the sweetest thing to behold.

serious question, are all you Pisces this fantastic? So much love within you. I cannot believe it, how well she treats me.

LOL... "all" seems like a bit of a reach. But a Pisces who is in a good place and a secure headspace can have a lot to give, not just love. Support, encouragement, understanding are given freely to those that have secured our affections.

I'm happy for you and rooting for you both.

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She is slowly crafting me to be the best version of myself. I can only imagine what will become of us. Thank you, we are both making the effort to keep each other happy.