player's dance

This topic was created in the Writing ✍️ forum by CreepyPants on Tuesday, December 3, 2013 and has 3 replies.

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@CreepyPants
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she's wrapped up in her self righteous morals
he's tied up with his reputation
she is so intuitive of all potential
he sees his hopes and dreams
her lips are wild petals
his body is mastered marble
players sometimes go on ahead
despite what the consequences will be
her subtle movements like a sinner
and his a devil's sense of humor
far beyond the point of suggestions
their favorite moving parts
linger longingly
for possession with lock and key
two masters of the art of war
and no enemy
two commanders of obedience
and no resistance
only one wishing star
only one vulnerability
a million complexities
all humility
and no hope
all of which lies in secret

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@lisabethur8
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Posted by CreepyPants
she's wrapped up in her self righteous morals
he's tied up with his reputation
she is so intuitive of all potential
he sees his hopes and dreams
her lips are wild petals
his body is mastered marble
players sometimes go on ahead
despite what the consequences will be
her subtle movements like a sinner
and his a devil's sense of humor
far beyond the point of suggestions
their favorite moving parts
linger longingly
for possession with lock and key
two masters of the art of war
and no enemy
two commanders of obedience
and no resistance
only one wishing star
only one vulnerability
a million complexities
all humility
and no hope
all of which lies in secret

wow that's really beautiful.