What do you think of my poem I wrote about a scorpio man

This poem is called 11.11 I think about you all of the time, but you’d never know it Deep down I’ve fallen in love with you, but I’ll never show it And it’s here in my bed Just these four walls again As I lie awake just wondering why I’d giv
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  • This poem is called 11.11

    I think about you all of the time, but you’d never know it
    Deep down I’ve fallen in love with you, but I’ll never show it
    And it’s here in my bed
    Just these four walls again
    As I lie awake just wondering why

    I’d give anything to have you wrapped around me
    Cuz there’s no place that I’d rather be
    But I’m 3,000 miles away and youre with someone else
    So it’s all just a fantasy.

    But I can’t help but wonder
    If it’d even make a difference
    If I told you what I’m keeping inside
    I do everything to push you away
    But I miss you more and more each day
    It’s getting harder and harder to hide
    It’s killing me living a lie

    Does your heart belong to me, like mine belongs to you?
    I can tell you everything, you’re one of the few
    But confessing that I need you is something I’ll never do
    I’ll love you from a distance so you never break my heart
    And spend our whole lives wishing that we weren’t so far apart

    Do you still get butterflies when you get a text from me?
    Do you fantasize about making love under the stars
    Even though we’ve never made love before
    Do you wonder what it would be like
    Just you and I
    Skin to skin, Soul to soul
    To take me in a complete state of vulnerability
    Get lost in each other’s eyes
    Lose track of time
    as our breathing synchronizes and the rhythm of our bodies merges and the waves crash beside us

    Imagine a connection so intense
    You spend most of your time trying to avoid it
    Because you know how much it could destroy you
    And you would never be the same
    Imagine a connection so intense that the making love to that person for the first time felt like your first time all over again, but better.
  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
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  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
    You’re one of my fave trolls.
  • Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues.
  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand
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    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing
  • Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand
    click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more.
  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand
    click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche.
  • Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche. click to expand
    click to expand


    I’d worry more about the fact that your favorite hobby is hiding behind a phone bullying strangers on the internet.
  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche. click to expand


    I’d worry more about the fact that your favorite hobby is hiding behind a phone bullying strangers on the internet. click to expand
    click to expand

    You should write a poem about it.
  • Lala1393
    I AM a Scorpio & I WILL eat you.Rising: Cancer/Moon Scorp/Venus: Scorp/Mercury
    24 years old female from Paris, France
    Oh dear ...

    :/
  • Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche. click to expand


    I’d worry more about the fact that your favorite hobby is hiding behind a phone bullying strangers on the internet. click to expand

    You should write a poem about it. click to expand
    click to expand
    Nah I think I’ve given you enough attention.
  • Aliensusedourbogroll
    No silicon heaven? Preposterous! Where would all the calculators go?
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche. click to expand


    I’d worry more about the fact that your favorite hobby is hiding behind a phone bullying strangers on the internet. click to expand

    You should write a poem about it. click to expand
    Nah I think I’ve given you enough attention. click to expand
    click to expand

    Trolling is hard work I guess.
  • Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    Posted by AriesAngel92
    Posted by Aliensusedourbogroll
    You’re one of my fave trolls.


    Do you just call someone a troll to be a dick/ cuz you’re annoying or do you genuinely believe I didn’t put Time and effort into this poem? You’re clearly the troll; so here’s the attention you desperately wanted. But I’m curious as to why you think anytime I say something I’m not being serious. Maybe you’re just autistic. You seem to be awful at picking up social cues. click to expand

    Dude............
    The title.........
    11:11
    I burst out laughing click to expand


    I think it’s time to go back to special ed dude. 11.11 is the title of the poem because that’s when people make wishes. Now I’m gonna go back to ignoring you like everyone else does. Go pick your nose and eat it some more. click to expand

    That’s why laughed. It’s such a cliche. click to expand


    I’d worry more about the fact that your favorite hobby is hiding behind a phone bullying strangers on the internet. click to expand

    You should write a poem about it. click to expand
    Nah I think I’ve given you enough attention. click to expand

    Trolling is hard work I guess. click to expand
    click to expand
    Doesn’t seem like it, you sit on your fat ass and do it all day
  • Posted by Lala1393
    Oh dear ...

    :/

    What?
  • Posted by AriesAngel92
    This poem is called 11.11

    I think about you all of the time, but you’d never know it
    Deep down I’ve fallen in love with you, but I’ll never show it
    And it’s here in my bed
    Just these four walls again
    As I lie awake just wondering why

    I’d give anything to have you wrapped around me
    Cuz there’s no place that I’d rather be
    But I’m 3,000 miles away and youre with someone else
    So it’s all just a fantasy.

    But I can’t help but wonder
    If it’d even make a difference
    If I told you what I’m keeping inside
    I do everything to push you away
    But I miss you more and more each day
    It’s getting harder and harder to hide
    It’s killing me living a lie

    Does your heart belong to me, like mine belongs to you?
    I can tell you everything, you’re one of the few
    But confessing that I need you is something I’ll never do
    I’ll love you from a distance so you never break my heart
    And spend our whole lives wishing that we weren’t so far apart

    Do you still get butterflies when you get a text from me?
    Do you fantasize about making love under the stars
    Even though we’ve never made love before
    Do you wonder what it would be like
    Just you and I
    Skin to skin, Soul to soul
    To take me in a complete state of vulnerability
    Get lost in each other’s eyes
    Lose track of time
    as our breathing synchronizes and the rhythm of our bodies merges and the waves crash beside us

    Imagine a connection so intense
    You spend most of your time trying to avoid it
    Because you know how much it could destroy you
    And you would never be the same
    Imagine a connection so intense that the making love to that person for the first time felt like your first time all over again, but better.


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