What do you think of my poem I wrote about a scorpio man (Page 2)

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I'm snickering at all you folks that haven't figured it out yet.

The trolling ?
Or the fact that she's taurusgal92 click to expand

Both. There are people in here that haven't figured it out. Lol click to expand

Haha I was one of them. However I guess I'm pms'ing and bored of my homework. Seemed fun at the beginning but now...it's boring. I truly believed it was true haha. click to expand

It is easy to fall for it at first. As long as we are entertained, all that matters. Lol

We are all trolls on different levels. click to expand

Trying to convince everyone I’m a troll to distract them from the fact that you’re a whale? That’s nice. click to expand

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🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋

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Posted by nikkistar
I'm snickering at all you folks that haven't figured it out yet.

The trolling ?
Or the fact that she's taurusgal92 click to expand

Both. There are people in here that haven't figured it out. Lol click to expand

Haha I was one of them. However I guess I'm pms'ing and bored of my homework. Seemed fun at the beginning but now...it's boring. I truly believed it was true haha. click to expand

It is easy to fall for it at first. As long as we are entertained, all that matters. Lol

We are all trolls on different levels. click to expand

Trying to convince everyone I’m a troll to distract them from the fact that you’re a whale? That’s nice. click to expand

🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋🐋 click to expand

🐋+🐵= fwieeeeendsss
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BFF!

Posted by ScorpioTruth

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Posted by Lala1393

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Posted by nikkistar
I'm snickering at all you folks that haven't figured it out yet.

The trolling ?
Or the fact that she's taurusgal92 click to expand

Both. There are people in here that haven't figured it out. Lol click to expand

Haha I was one of them. However I guess I'm pms'ing and bored of my homework. Seemed fun at the beginning but now...it's boring. I truly believed it was true haha. click to expand

It is easy to fall for it at first. As long as we are entertained, all that matters. Lol

We are all trolls on different levels. click to expand

It occasionally makes for good exercise of my mercury in scorp 🤣 click to expand

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My Mars in the 3rd house has fun with it. Lol

Posted by ScorpioTruth
I can’t help but think it’s pitiful when females overcompensate for their own insecurity by trying to cover it up with hateful, nasty, racist words and try their hardest to act tough behind the keyboard.

You know, it’s kind of cute, like a yapping chihuahua that wants so desperately to believe that it’s a big fierce pit bull. It acts tough, but the bark is always bigger than the bite. That’s what I think of when I think of the OP and all her hateful comments.

What a manipulative thing to say. All I did was stand up for myself. Not my fault you know none of these people and get yourself so involved you question my morals on a situation that has NOTHING to do with you.

It's like an over exaggerated caricature of Rom. LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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I can’t help but think it’s pitiful when females overcompensate for their own insecurity by trying to cover it up with hateful, nasty, racist words and try their hardest to act tough behind the keyboard.

You know, it’s kind of cute, like a yapping chihuahua that wants so desperately to believe that it’s a big fierce pit bull. It acts tough, but the bark is always bigger than the bite. That’s what I think of when I think of the OP and all her hateful comments.

What a manipulative thing to say. All I did was stand up for myself. Not my fault you know none of these people and get yourself so involved you question my morals on a situation that has NOTHING to do with you. click to expand

And this is the part where the cute little chihuahua becomes annoying and you want to punt-kick him across the room.

Stop playing victim. I didn’t come for you until I saw all your racist ass comments. There are better ways to defend yourself. There’s never an excuse for it, it just shows how you really feel and how ugly you are on the inside. Go read a self-help book and try to understand why you’re so hateful. Try fixing THAT before you try fixing things with the scorp.

Going to work now. ✌🏼 click to expand

I think she's lacking the intellectual skills that enable her to see fault in what she is saying and how/why it's offensive. But she also is a troll who gets off on provoking people.
Note:
1st sign that she's a troll, she is talking about a guy she claims to like but then she says she's a lesbian.

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Instead of trying to figure out a stranger you’ve never met, go get a job and stop lying about having places to be 😂 loser. That’s first of all. Secondly it’s judgmental of you to assume that because I’m lesbian I can’t be interested in a man.

I’m an Aries girl. I’ve been with a Scorpio guy for four years.

Listen to me, LEAVE HIM ALONE, forget about him.

Aries and Scorpio don’t get well togheter in a romantic relationship. I spent four years giving so much attention to a Scorpio that was giving me almost none, four years fighting with a Scorpio that doesn’t want to solve problems together but just run away from them, giving me the silence treatment, four years with his Scorpio’s negative view of life. Scorpios and Aries aren’t just meant to be.

I have some good Scorpio friends though, keep it friendly.

I thought the poem was cute

I had two scorpio boyfriends and one of their roommates who was also a scorpio liked me lol they are meh

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Posted by AriesAngel92

This poem is called 11.11



I think about you all of the time, but you’d never know it

Deep down I’ve fallen in love with you, but I’ll never show it

And it’s here in my bed

Just these four walls again

As I lie awake just wondering why



I’d give anything to have you wrapped around me

Cuz there’s no place that I’d rather be

But I’m 3,000 miles away and youre with someone else

So it’s all just a fantasy.



But I can’t help but wonder

If it’d even make a difference

If I told you what I’m keeping inside

I do everything to push you away

But I miss you more and more each day

It’s getting harder and harder to hide

It’s killing me living a lie



Does your heart belong to me, like mine belongs to you?

I can tell you everything, you’re one of the few

But confessing that I need you is something I’ll never do

I’ll love you from a distance so you never break my heart

And spend our whole lives wishing that we weren’t so far apart



Do you still get butterflies when you get a text from me?

Do you fantasize about making love under the stars

Even though we’ve never made love before

Do you wonder what it would be like

Just you and I

Skin to skin, Soul to soul

To take me in a complete state of vulnerability

Get lost in each other’s eyes

Lose track of time

as our breathing synchronizes and the rhythm of our bodies merges and the waves crash beside us



Imagine a connection so intense

You spend most of your time trying to avoid it

Because you know how much it could destroy you

And you would never be the same

Imagine a connection so intense that the making love to that person for the first time felt like your first time all over again, but better.

Gemitati? click to expand

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OP, there is a POETRY section. 😛



https://www.dxpnet.com/opinion/writing/

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I see my name. Don’t get why.

I actually liked the poem. Haven’t seen it before. And don’t see how it makes OP a troll...at all...

Posted by Arieschick92

Thank you. It came from the heart. I’m embarrassed of it now. But back then it meant a lot to me

There is nothing embarrassing in your poem. I honestly don’t understand why all these strange people ganged up on you...I know one of them paid dearly for it. So go on. Don’t mind haters. They have issues that they can’t pour out so it’s ripping them from inside and getting into their heads.

OP, not sure what your goals were with them poem. Do you want to write as a hobby? Get good at it? If you do want to write and have it a piece of art then a suggestion would be to look up literary techniques and try using those with your raw emotions.

In terms of understanding your emotions, clearly expressed 🙂

OP, i've probably written numerous of these obvious heartfelt poems. When i was younger I'd make my bfs write them back to me lol. It's just nice to have your emotions on paper because the weight of the grief lessens so.

So how's it going now?

Cuz I doubt he ever read all that shit.

Posted by AriesAngel92

Imagine a connection so intense

You spend most of your time trying to avoid it

Because you know how much it could destroy you

And you would never be the same

Imagine a connection so intense that the making love to that person for the first time felt like your first time all over again, but better.

There is this poem I call "I cringed af."

Behind every poem

dedicated to a Scorpio

There is that "intense" Scorpio douche

that will eventually make you cringe

for ever liking him in the way

That you liked him

And in by doing so—which is more—you'll be a Woman, little girl!



I think it's by Rudyard Kipling 🙂