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schoenetanz
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but seriously!!

if you think about it-

this dude hanging out in his basement ("artist's studio") trying to fit a dress on a fat dead guy but has to really struggle with it because the arm is rotting off...andhes gotta be thinking...AWWW MAN- now I'm gonna have to sew that fker back on and the wife is upstairs calling him for dinner "peter honey, yer dinner is getting cold up here- I made your favorite garlic bread!"

it is fking funny
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schoenetanz
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You say whatever you can to get the best reaction...


yes db- very true...but you are a scorp so you must kknow that I really do it because it brings out the most interesting side of people when they respond ... well at least I feel I find out if they are someone I care to talk to or not...right of the bat

if by "best" reaction you mean the most TELLING reaction

yes,

without a doubt
Velvet whispers
Inaudible murmuring
Stifled secrets

Indigo shadows veil desperation
Obscuring desire

In a lucid azure dream
I found you

Under a sapphire sky.
phoenix_rising
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Well, it so happens that I was asked my permission to dedicate 2 whole pages to me in an upcoming book called The International Who's Who of Poetry with one of the pages being my poem and the other page being a biography of me. Woohoo! (Hopefully it's n
phoenix_rising
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I'd be interested to read more of your stuff, if you're willing to share.
phoenix_rising
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A Maiden
Sara Teasdale

Oh if I were the velvet rose
Upon the red rose vine,
I'd climb to touch his window
And make his casement fine.

And if I were the little bird
That twitters on the tree,
All day I'd si
phoenix_rising
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Holy butter.
Morganofmind
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Some people are so shy about what they write, they won't share it...

I ask: why do you write if not to be read?
Morganofmind
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I'm suffering from a little writers block. I'd would *appreciate* any help given by the inspiration dxpians. The piece is humor.

What would a good break-up speech sound like if it is heard over the answering machine? I want her to be cold and s
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