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I was asked to make writing exercises, so I thought I'd try to do that. So, write a flash fiction of a maximum of 300 words and give me your major mercury aspects, including orbs, and I'll give you a writing exercise that I think might help. I won't do it for all eternity, so we'll see for how long it will last or if anyone is interested in this at all. Good luck!🙂
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Hehe. Such a Capricorn post!

Umm.. I'll try.

~ A little girl was squatting by a puddle and playing with her paper boat. A sparrow lands beside the little girl chirping sweetly, pecking its little beak randomly on the ground as though picking on something to eat. The girl suddenly realises she has somewhere else to go! The little sparrow flies away. The girl keeps walking on the muddy path, careful not to get her dress dirty for mother will be upset. There are trees on either side of the road but she cannot remember the names of a few she had seen before in her books. Suddenly a monkey with her baby clinging tightly to her run across the road, startling the girl. The girl gets excited and runs over to a shrub to catch a sight of the pair once again, but cannot see them. She stands still for a while, and a beautiful elegant butterfly lime green in colour fluttered around the girl for a while and lands on her shoulder, she girl is smiling from ear to ear. She wanted to show this to mama. The girl tries to remain motionless for she didn't want the butterfly to fly away, she then gently and slowly tries to hold it in her little chubby fingers, but the butterfly flutters away. The girl says "no, don't go". She stands still watching her little friend fly about aimlessly in the air and over the shrub.

Close to 200 words, I'm going to stop lol

Mercury in Pisces in 9th house.

Mercury trine moon with an orb of (what should I say ...9?) 9
Mercury conjunct Mars ...with an orb of 4
Mercury trine Jupiter ...with an orb of -1
Mercury conjunct Saturn ...with an orb of 6
Mercury opposite Chiron ...with an orb of -9
Mercury trine ASC ...with an orb of -8

I see a half triangle ....dont know what to call it 😕

Mercury half triangle(black in colour) my Venus ...with an orb of -2
Mercury half triangle Neptune ...with an orb of 2

Done 😄
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Hehe. Such a Capricorn post!

Umm.. I'll try.

~ A little girl was squatting by a puddle and playing with her paper boat. A sparrow lands beside the little girl chirping sweetly, pecking its little beak randomly on the ground as though picking on something to eat. The girl suddenly realises she has somewhere else to go! The little sparrow flies away. The girl keeps walking on the muddy path, careful not to get her dress dirty for mother will be upset. There are trees on either side of the road but she cannot remember the names of a few she had seen before in her books. Suddenly a monkey with her baby clinging tightly to her run across the road, startling the girl. The girl gets excited and runs over to a shrub to catch a sight of the pair once again, but cannot see them. She stands still for a while, and a beautiful elegant butterfly lime green in colour fluttered around the girl for a while and lands on her shoulder, she girl is smiling from ear to ear. She wanted to show this to mama. The girl tries to remain motionless for she didn't want the butterfly to fly away, she then gently and slowly tries to hold it in her little chubby fingers, but the butterfly flutters away. The girl says "no, don't go". She stands still watching her little friend fly about aimlessly in the air and over the shrub.

Close to 200 words, I'm going to stop lol

Mercury in Pisces in 9th house.

Mercury trine moon with an orb of (what should I say ...9?) 9
Mercury conjunct Mars ...with an orb of 4
Mercury trine Jupiter ...with an orb of -1
Mercury conjunct Saturn ...with an orb of 6
Mercury opposite Chiron ...with an orb of -9
Mercury trine ASC ...with an orb of -8

I see a half triangle ....dont know what to call it 😕

Mercury half triangle(black in colour) my Venus ...with an orb of -2
Mercury half triangle Neptune ...with an orb of 2

Done 😄
Hehehe Lucky me, being a capricorn. 😄

If I understand you correctly, the "half triangle" is a semisquare, which is a minor aspect of 45degrees.

Exercise:
Write a story with a clear beginning, middle and ending. During the course of the story, the main character must change his or her mind, or change or strongly question his or her entire belief system. You are not allowed to use the word "little" in this story. Include an element of surprise - something the reader is not likely to forsee.

Good luck! 🙂
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Night falls and she crouches behind a tree, hoping he doesn't hear her breathing. *slow your breath* He is on the prowl hunting her down, wondering, "how did he let her escape?" He knows he should have never trusted her. When she said she would obey him against his better judgement he let her out of the cage.

That's when it happened. First she seemed scared, polietly asking if she had gone too far. He liked being in control for once, soaking up the power it gave him. "Poor girl." And in a blink she was off. Long brown hair shining like glass under the moonlight veil with nothing but the loud "thump" of the patio door to awake him from his confusion.

Still she stays low, careful not to move, breathe, think.. He dances between trees in heavy old boots... The sound of leaves crunching beneath his overweight body is deafening. "crunch" "crunch" "crunch" as he nears her.

Her heart feels as heavy as the ocean, beating inside her like a hurricane, each beat a wave, drowning out the sound of him closing in.


Write a story with at least two characters in it. Write it in third person. The pov of the story is limited strictly to one character - everything that is to be seen or felt is from the pov of this one character. The main character will be or become scared of something or someone. Show the reader this without telling us, but instead by showing us in images(gifs not allowed😉) You are allowed a maximum of one metaphor. No use of ellipsis is allowed in the story.

Good luck! 🙂
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The window was half shut as the rain poured against the sill. Downstairs she heard a knock at the door. Half frantic, and half worried she knew that her time had come. As the moments passed the knocks became incessant. Summoning the courage that was buried deep within her heart, she went down stairs. Step by step, and creek by creek inching closer to the dred of this day. She took a moment to fix herself up, and the tied her hair back in a ponytail. She knew what was coming, and figured it was better to look polished than to show any of the angst. Her polished red nails shined brightly as they reached for the golden Victorian doorknob. A relic of her past. Turning and cringing, she opened the door in one felt swoop. All she saw were her friends and a birthday cake. This was August 3rd a day she dreds every year. Today she is 28.


Mercury House 12
Mercury 26°21' Taurus
Mercury Conjunction AS Orb 7°44'
Sun Conjunction Mercury Orb 5°32'


I don't know if there is anything else i should add for mercury.
Write a story with a surprise ending, but that will not be revieled until in the last or second to last sentence. The main character could very well have been born on August 3rd, because he or she is a leo sun, moon, merc and venus, all in the 5th house. Go nuts with this - flamboyance and exaggeratons is what I want, as well as detail. Don't forget that this can be experienced more accutely when there is contrast. I know you already know that, because you used that technique in your text - I just wanted to make sure you didn't think that I wanted you to omit that from the exercise story.

I'd love to know your ASC, if you don't mind. *Edit: Sorry. I see now that you have given me enough information to get that you have a gem ASC. Or did I get that wrong?

Good luck! 🙂
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Sag merc in 5th

Conjunct sag sun 0.55°
Trine aries mars
Quintile libra moon 0.08°
Semi sextile scorp Venus 0.17°
What's your merc trine mars orb?

Sag merc 5th house trine Aries mars 9th 4.47°


Do the degrees make sense to you? I fascinated by those who know the intricities of astrology better than I.
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Thank you!🙂

I don't claim to know anything about astrology, so what I'm going to say is purely how I see it. The tighter the aspect the stronger it's going to be, and it would be more likely that the energy would flow that way. Think of an electrical circuit and of the path of least resistance. The nature of a hard aspect is ofc going to be one of resistance, by nature, but it's a forced kind of resistance, so they still apply. Minor aspects, I check only in specific cases and with a degree of 0degrees(on rare occasions, I may use an orb of 1degree)

When I display my chart on astro.com, I usually use the reduce/increase orbs option at 70% , but that's because I have studied my chart and think that's an appropriate number. For other people's charts I may use other numbers, because I feel it's appropriate for their specific charts, so I can't sit here and say "use this or that number," because it may not be applicable to your chart.

As I said before, this is all how I see it - I'm not an astrologer.
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The window was half shut as the rain poured against the sill. Downstairs she heard a knock at the door. Half frantic, and half worried she knew that her time had come. As the moments passed the knocks became incessant. Summoning the courage that was buried deep within her heart, she went down stairs. Step by step, and creek by creek inching closer to the dred of this day. She took a moment to fix herself up, and the tied her hair back in a ponytail. She knew what was coming, and figured it was better to look polished than to show any of the angst. Her polished red nails shined brightly as they reached for the golden Victorian doorknob. A relic of her past. Turning and cringing, she opened the door in one felt swoop. All she saw were her friends and a birthday cake. This was August 3rd a day she dreds every year. Today she is 28.


Mercury House 12
Mercury 26°21' Taurus
Mercury Conjunction AS Orb 7°44'
Sun Conjunction Mercury Orb 5°32'


I don't know if there is anything else i should add for mercury.
Write a story with a surprise ending, but that will not be revieled until in the last or second to last sentence. The main character could very well have been born on August 3rd, because he or she is a leo sun, moon, merc and venus, all in the 5th house. Go nuts with this - flamboyance and exaggeratons is what I want, as well as detail. Don't forget that this can be experienced more accutely when there is contrast. I know you already know that, because you used that technique in your text - I just wanted to make sure you didn't think that I wanted you to omit that from the exercise story.

I'd love to know your ASC, if you don't mind. *Edit: Sorry. I see now that you have given me enough information to get that you have a gem ASC. Or did I get that wrong?

Good luck! 🙂
Yup Gem Asc!
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Best ASC evvva! 😉
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Mercury conjunction venus 9°32' 42
Mercury conjunction jupiter 0°50' 714
Thank you!

Exercise:
Without needing to do any research, write about JK Rowling. No exaggerations, no clichees - just down to earth what you feel is her true human nature. Who is she really? Don't explain or describe, but show us via her thoughts, choices and actions. Be subtle. Write this as a short short story of a maximum of 150 to 200 words in third person, very close to the main character's mind and with her as the only person in the story(if there are other people in the story, they may not in any way interact with her). The story should be set in her home or in the coffee shop where she used to sit and write HP, and there need to be a clear beginning, middle and ending. And she will not think about sex in any way.

This is a difficult exercise - think about it a lot before considering the piece to be finished. You need to really dig deep into her mind - or at least what you imagine it to be.

Good luck! 🙂
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I need to get better so I shall endeavour to keep writing.
That's awsome!🙂

Exercise:
Write a character driven story about the dwarf in your story where you are very concious about when to present each piece of information about him and the setting. Write it in third person, very close to the main character. Carefully consider pov, tone and voice. Really fine tune it. Write in images - show, don't tell. Also consider punctuation, and especially comma splices. Use one tense throughout the entire story.

Good luck!🙂
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Night falls and she crouches behind a tree, hoping he doesn't hear her breathing. *slow your breath* He is on the prowl hunting her down, wondering, "how did he let her escape?" He knows he should have never trusted her. When she said she would obey him against his better judgement he let her out of the cage.

That's when it happened. First she seemed scared, polietly asking if she had gone too far. He liked being in control for once, soaking up the power it gave him. "Poor girl." And in a blink she was off. Long brown hair shining like glass under the moonlight veil with nothing but the loud "thump" of the patio door to awake him from his confusion.

Still she stays low, careful not to move, breathe, think.. He dances between trees in heavy old boots... The sound of leaves crunching beneath his overweight body is deafening. "crunch" "crunch" "crunch" as he nears her.

Her heart feels as heavy as the ocean, beating inside her like a hurricane, each beat a wave, drowning out the sound of him closing in.


Write a story with at least two characters in it. Write it in third person. The pov of the story is limited strictly to one character - everything that is to be seen or felt is from the pov of this one character. The main character will be or become scared of something or someone. Show the reader this without telling us, but instead by showing us in images(gifs not allowed😉) You are allowed a maximum of one metaphor. No use of ellipsis is allowed in the story.

Good luck! 🙂
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They stood staring into each other's eyes. No telling how much time had come to pass but, she felt it was eternity. "Is it true?" She questioned in her head, that the eyes are Windows to the soul?

She noticed the sun reflect off his dagger before realizing his intention. He was going to kill her. No ordinary way but the 20/20 version of love gone wrong. Too gruesome for the media to ignore obviously.

His calloused tan skin looked like leather showing a fist that knew hard work, as he clutched his weapon, with full intent to show force. He whiped it in front of her in the fashion a pitcher would wind up a baseball.. To his side and above his shoulder with a momentum that blurred her vision. She felt every muscle seize up as the adrenaline pumping fueled her.

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Night falls and she crouches behind a tree, hoping he doesn't hear her breathing. *slow your breath* He is on the prowl hunting her down, wondering, "how did he let her escape?" He knows he should have never trusted her. When she said she would obey him against his better judgement he let her out of the cage.

That's when it happened. First she seemed scared, polietly asking if she had gone too far. He liked being in control for once, soaking up the power it gave him. "Poor girl." And in a blink she was off. Long brown hair shining like glass under the moonlight veil with nothing but the loud "thump" of the patio door to awake him from his confusion.

Still she stays low, careful not to move, breathe, think.. He dances between trees in heavy old boots... The sound of leaves crunching beneath his overweight body is deafening. "crunch" "crunch" "crunch" as he nears her.

Her heart feels as heavy as the ocean, beating inside her like a hurricane, each beat a wave, drowning out the sound of him closing in.


Write a story with at least two characters in it. Write it in third person. The pov of the story is limited strictly to one character - everything that is to be seen or felt is from the pov of this one character. The main character will be or become scared of something or someone. Show the reader this without telling us, but instead by showing us in images(gifs not allowed😉) You are allowed a maximum of one metaphor. No use of ellipsis is allowed in the story.

Good luck! 🙂
They stood staring into each other's eyes. No telling how much time had come to pass but, she felt it was eternity. "Is it true?" She questioned in her head, that the eyes are Windows to the soul?

She noticed the sun reflect off his dagger before realizing his intention. He was going to kill her. No ordinary way but the 20/20 version of love gone wrong. Too gruesome for the media to ignore obviously.

His calloused tan skin looked like leather showing a fist that knew hard work, as he clutched his weapon, with full intent to show force. He whiped it in front of her in the fashion a pitcher would wind up a baseball.. To his side and above his shoulder with a momentum that blurred her vision. She felt every muscle seize up as the adrenaline pumping fueled her.

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Love that you keep writing!🙂 *Cheering Mohini on*
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A loud thump woke Qassim up from sleep in his hide. He quickly glanced, semi winking, at the display of the IR scanner he had set up near his hide overlooking the dry river valley below. Nothing. It would alert him anyhow if it did detect something he thought. Must have been a dream. The barren, rocky landscape in the valley below him offered little cover for anything.

He was quite content to leave it at that, since he was on covert patrol duty the previous day in which he covered 130 kilometers in full combat gear on his electrobike and still feeling very sleepy but then came another, louder bang, muffled as from a great distance and as he turned upwards scanning the sky he could see an incredible sight.

“Well, well, by Allah, what is this? Are the kuffar fighting among themselves with some new weaponry?” as he watched hundreds of brightly illuminated objects re-entering thunderingly the atmosphere at different angles all across the clear African sky.

As if the universe decided to support his thoughts, right on cue, he could see anti ballistic missiles ascending from the ground to intercept. He could quite clearly observe the first stage engine blasts as distant, pale dots in the early morning, a sight he had seen a few times before, when they were intercepting GIC launched ballistic missiles, fired toward the kuffar nations, as they were known.

“But something is not right here” thought Qassim, turning eastwards towards the Indian ocean, he could also see the streaks over India and most of Asia, at roughly 500km altitude and dropping fast in differing ballistic arches. It was beautiful in it’s own way he thought.

If this is world war III something must be coming this way too, for sure. Another glance at the sky directly above him revealed nothing, although in the corner of his eye he already spotted the first interceptions and quickly switched to observing that.

“By Allah, where are all the missiles?” Qassim thought out loud.

The number of dots which indicated an rocket exhaust plume he could see was woefully too small to intercept every object and as far as he could see two or more of them were needed to successfully intercept one object anyway.

A few seconds later after the first ones dissapeared behind the horizon he could feel it too. The ground started shaking in small intervals

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Allright!🙂 May I ask your mercury placements with aspects, including orbs?
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Could you check it? Could it be that you have a fairly tight aspect to mars from your mercury. Perhaps venus or the 7th house is involved too?
If i read this well....it says Mercury conjunction Mars and then there's some degrees, i assume those are orbs? The value is 4 degrees, 43 minutes....

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Omg, my theory works! Wohooo!😄

I'll give you an exercise and I'll be hard on you, considering it's for a book. Give me a minute or two.🙂
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@aquanib

Five years prior to the event you write about in your text, Qassim is casually walking around a market place with a good friend. The objective for him is to buy a gift for the person he loves the most. The friends are both relaxed; no one is in a hurry. The reader don't know all this until they can read it in your text.

Include at least some dialogue and consider setting, mood, voice and tone, especially. Don't forget "show, don't tell." Check punctuation to the point of nitpicking.

Good luck!🙂
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Posted by RumiL
Hehe. Such a Capricorn post!

Umm.. I'll try.

~ A little girl was squatting by a puddle and playing with her paper boat. A sparrow lands beside the little girl chirping sweetly, pecking its little beak randomly on the ground as though picking on something to eat. The girl suddenly realises she has somewhere else to go! The little sparrow flies away. The girl keeps walking on the muddy path, careful not to get her dress dirty for mother will be upset. There are trees on either side of the road but she cannot remember the names of a few she had seen before in her books. Suddenly a monkey with her baby clinging tightly to her run across the road, startling the girl. The girl gets excited and runs over to a shrub to catch a sight of the pair once again, but cannot see them. She stands still for a while, and a beautiful elegant butterfly lime green in colour fluttered around the girl for a while and lands on her shoulder, she girl is smiling from ear to ear. She wanted to show this to mama. The girl tries to remain motionless for she didn't want the butterfly to fly away, she then gently and slowly tries to hold it in her little chubby fingers, but the butterfly flutters away. The girl says "no, don't go". She stands still watching her little friend fly about aimlessly in the air and over the shrub.

Close to 200 words, I'm going to stop lol

Mercury in Pisces in 9th house.

Mercury trine moon with an orb of (what should I say ...9?) 9
Mercury conjunct Mars ...with an orb of 4
Mercury trine Jupiter ...with an orb of -1
Mercury conjunct Saturn ...with an orb of 6
Mercury opposite Chiron ...with an orb of -9
Mercury trine ASC ...with an orb of -8

I see a half triangle ....dont know what to call it 😕

Mercury half triangle(black in colour) my Venus ...with an orb of -2
Mercury half triangle Neptune ...with an orb of 2

Done 😄
Grade: B (solid; good development)
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A loud thump woke Qassim up from sleep in his hide. He quickly glanced, semi winking, at the display of the IR scanner he had set up near his hide overlooking the dry river valley below. Nothing. It would alert him anyhow if it did detect something he thought. Must have been a dream. The barren, rocky landscape in the valley below him offered little cover for anything.

He was quite content to leave it at that, since he was on covert patrol duty the previous day in which he covered 130 kilometers in full combat gear on his electrobike and still feeling very sleepy but then came another, louder bang, muffled as from a great distance and as he turned upwards scanning the sky he could see an incredible sight.

“Well, well, by Allah, what is this? Are the kuffar fighting among themselves with some new weaponry?” as he watched hundreds of brightly illuminated objects re-entering thunderingly the atmosphere at different angles all across the clear African sky.

As if the universe decided to support his thoughts, right on cue, he could see anti ballistic missiles ascending from the ground to intercept. He could quite clearly observe the first stage engine blasts as distant, pale dots in the early morning, a sight he had seen a few times before, when they were intercepting GIC launched ballistic missiles, fired toward the kuffar nations, as they were known.

“But something is not right here” thought Qassim, turning eastwards towards the Indian ocean, he could also see the streaks over India and most of Asia, at roughly 500km altitude and dropping fast in differing ballistic arches. It was beautiful in it’s own way he thought.

If this is world war III something must be coming this way too, for sure. Another glance at the sky directly above him revealed nothing, although in the corner of his eye he already spotted the first interceptions and quickly switched to observing that.

“By Allah, where are all the missiles?” Qassim thought out loud.

The number of dots which indicated an rocket exhaust plume he could see was woefully too small to intercept every object and as far as he could see two or more of them were needed to successfully intercept one object anyway.

A few seconds later after the first ones dissapeared behind the horizon he could feel it too. The ground started shaking in small intervals

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Aquanib ©
Grade: A- (nice suspense and good usage of sophisticated language)
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Greggy is living vicariously through his man-crush Mr. Diesel. Ever since Greggy was a child has he compared his puny testicles to those of the all-american action hero inprinted both on the big screen and in little Greggy's mind. What he cannot fathom is that Hollywood action movies are designed to appeal to projecting, overcompensating, twat chucks that are ready to worship anything and anyone provided it has enough muscle mass. from a triceratops to a sumo wrestler. Even until this day he continues to project is cuck fantasies and masculine insecurities on these fat "actors" believing them to be living the life of an"alpha" when in reality they are snorting cocaine off Michael Bay's diiick to get an audition for Transformers 6, or is it 7? I never can keep count of this rubbish.


Well, I already have your chart, so...

Rose(Titanic) is having tea with her dearest friend in their finest dresses. They discuss crumpets. Make the dialogue as thrilling as possible. You are free to extend their conversation into a discussion about the diversity of ginger teas. Make it believable.

Good luck, pisces boy. May your Gemini ASC guide you into literary greatness.🙂
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Greggy is living vicariously through his man-crush Mr. Diesel. Ever since Greggy was a child has he compared his puny testicles to those of the all-american action hero inprinted both on the big screen and in little Greggy's mind. What he cannot fathom is that Hollywood action movies are designed to appeal to projecting, overcompensating, twat chucks that are ready to worship anything and anyone provided it has enough muscle mass. from a triceratops to a sumo wrestler. Even until this day he continues to project is cuck fantasies and masculine insecurities on these fat "actors" believing them to be living the life of an"alpha" when in reality they are snorting cocaine off Michael Bay's diiick to get an audition for Transformers 6, or is it 7? I never can keep count of this rubbish.


Lol what?

I give you a C-, for trying 🙂
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Greggy is living vicariously through his man-crush Mr. Diesel. Ever since Greggy was a child has he compared his puny testicles to those of the all-american action hero inprinted both on the big screen and in little Greggy's mind. What he cannot fathom is that Hollywood action movies are designed to appeal to projecting, overcompensating, twat chucks that are ready to worship anything and anyone provided it has enough muscle mass. from a triceratops to a sumo wrestler. Even until this day he continues to project is cuck fantasies and masculine insecurities on these fat "actors" believing them to be living the life of an"alpha" when in reality they are snorting cocaine off Michael Bay's diiick to get an audition for Transformers 6, or is it 7? I never can keep count of this rubbish.


Well, I already have your chart, so...

Rose(Titanic) is having tea with her dearest friend in their finest dresses. They discuss crumpets. Make the dialogue as thrilling as possible. You are free to extend their conversation into a discussion about the diversity of ginger teas. Make it believable.

Good luck, pisces boy. May your Gemini ASC guide you into literary greatness.🙂
I'm serious here

Mercury in Gemini

conjunct sun and Mars

square ascendant

opposition Pluto

trine Neptune

in the ninth house

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You forgot the orbs...
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I was asked to make writing exercises, so I thought I'd try to do that. So, write a flash fiction of a maximum of 300 words and give me your major mercury aspects, including orbs, and I'll give you a writing exercise that I think might help. I won't do it for all eternity, so we'll see for how long it will last or if anyone is interested in this at all. Good luck!🙂
I like your idea for this thread. Really really different on here ?
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Posted by themagnetoreborn
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Why don't you write one? Add mercury placements and aspects, including orbs, please.🙂
I just finished writing a 5300 character personal statement for something. I worked on it for literally a month straight ?

So I'll just resort to reading other ppls interesting stories.
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Aw, come on! All I'm asking is a maximum of 300 words and your mercury placements with aspects, including orbs. If you get to grade everyone, they should have the option to grade you, don't you think?🙂
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@themagnetoreborn And who are you to invade this thread and grade people out of nowhere?
Lol! I love this thread. There should be more like it.

But you pass by my standards. So don't take it personally 🙂

those damn vergos and their teacher student fetishes
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Lol!!! You know what I like about you? You're unintentionally funny; you don't need to use flashy memes or gifs that come across as corny nowadays.
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HappyCapper
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Posted by themagnetoreborn
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I was asked to make writing exercises, so I thought I'd try to do that. So, write a flash fiction of a maximum of 300 words and give me your major mercury aspects, including orbs, and I'll give you a writing exercise that I think might help. I won't do it for all eternity, so we'll see for how long it will last or if anyone is interested in this at all. Good luck!🙂
I like your idea for this thread. Really really different on here ?
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Thank you!🙂
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MagnetoReborn
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Posted by cliquey
Posted by themagnetoreborn
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@themagnetoreborn And who are you to invade this thread and grade people out of nowhere?
Lol! I love this thread. There should be more like it.

But you pass by my standards. So don't take it personally 🙂

those damn vergos and their teacher student fetishes
Lol!!! You know what I like about you? You're unintentionally funny; you don't need to use flashy memes or gifs that come across as corny nowadays.
Lol.. Stop lying you know you only like her cause of her boob pic. LOL

Why is this gross user even still here?
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Boob pic? Oh I honestly didn't see it. I swear

But what else can I say, I just appreciate straightforward people ?
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Posted by HappyCapper
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Why don't you write one? Add mercury placements and aspects, including orbs, please.🙂
I just finished writing a 5300 character personal statement for something. I worked on it for literally a month straight ?

So I'll just resort to reading other ppls interesting stories.
Aw, come on! All I'm asking is a maximum of 300 words and your mercury placements with aspects, including orbs. If you get to grade everyone, they should have the option to grade you, don't you think?🙂
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Hmm... Perhaps perhaps
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HappyCapper
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Yeah, that memory, huh? If you would have written that as a serious contribution and if you would indeed have had those placements and aspects, I may actually still have given you that exercise. That would have been a real challenge for such a person and they would surely need to get out of their own head and widen their view. Yup, I'm sticking to that exercise.🙂
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HappyCapper
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Posted by ElleDuMonde
I was all in until I read max of 300 words.

Mercury Conjunct Neptune

Mercury Opposite Saturn

Mercury Trine Midheaven

Moon Trine Mercury

Sag Merc Radioactive in the 2nd house
Yes, I know how it is "I would have written a shorter letter, but I did not have the time"

But, come ooon! You can do it!🙂 *cheers*

*Edit: And don't forget the orbs.
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HappyCapper
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Posted by themagnetoreborn
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Posted by themagnetoreborn
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@themagnetoreborn

Why don't you write one? Add mercury placements and aspects, including orbs, please.🙂
I just finished writing a 5300 character personal statement for something. I worked on it for literally a month straight ?

So I'll just resort to reading other ppls interesting stories.
Aw, come on! All I'm asking is a maximum of 300 words and your mercury placements with aspects, including orbs. If you get to grade everyone, they should have the option to grade you, don't you think?🙂
Hmm... Perhaps perhaps
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Nooo. Yes yes, is what you want to say.
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Posted by cliquey
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Yeah, that memory, huh? If you would have written that as a serious contribution and if you would indeed have had those placements and aspects, I may actually still have given you that exercise. That would have been a real challenge for such a person and they would surely need to get out of their own head and widen their view. Yup, I'm sticking to that exercise.🙂
These are my real placements and aspects, you seriously don't believe me? I got them wrong, because the orbs were too wide, I remembered them as tighter like the asc square and sun conjunction. Am I supposed to remember perfectly every degree. Your scorp moon is playing tricks on you
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LOL No, I seriously don't believe you.

Signed / Cancer chick with a scorp moon
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Posted by cliquey
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Yeah, that memory, huh? If you would have written that as a serious contribution and if you would indeed have had those placements and aspects, I may actually still have given you that exercise. That would have been a real challenge for such a person and they would surely need to get out of their own head and widen their view. Yup, I'm sticking to that exercise.🙂
These are my real placements and aspects, you seriously don't believe me? I got them wrong, because the orbs were too wide, I remembered them as tighter like the asc square and sun conjunction. Am I supposed to remember perfectly every degree. Your scorp moon is playing tricks on you
LOL No, I seriously don't believe you.

Signed / Cancer chick with a scorp moon
Well, I can't say it's your fault. I literally told you to give me a chart to troll people with, but now I'm serious(lel)
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Yes, my cancer sun does indeed have a hard time believing that. Buuut, if you wanna play with that, I gave you your exercise...and probably the most difficult of them all. A real challenge. Work it!
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